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Finding the Line 2. The Line

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Genres: General Fiction
Sub-genres: Drama

At what point do you give up? Ryan spent half the semester 'studying' with Brady, the star hockey player at his new school, when Brady suddenly blindsides him in the park one day, changing their relationship forever. Ryan knows he's falling in love with the other teen, but there comes a point where he may have to draw the line and decide what's best for his heart.

span style="color:rgb(40,40,40);font-family:helvetica, arial, sans-serif;">This story follows up with Ryan's POV from Guarding the Line, a previous anthology piece focusing on Brady; It can be read either as a standalone, or in conjunction with Guarding the Line.
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  • 1. Chapter 1
    • 2,662 Words
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Caz Pedroso

  

I really felt for Ryan in this story. If I hadn’t already read the previous story from Brady’s POV I would have been very angry with Brady. Although I would have taken into consideration that he was a confused young man as well I would also have been annoyed to see another young man’s feelings being played with. I know there are people out there that aren’t sure about who they fancy or why. But, that does not give anyone leave to mess with someone else’s feelings, paying attention to them one moment and pulling away from them the next.

 

This story is short, to the point, and will leave you wanting more. A very good addition to The Line series and I’m looking forward to what happens next with this couple.

 

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