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In the Fishbowl 2. Long Way

   (3 reviews)

Sequel to The Long Way

Copyright © 2010 DomLuka; All Rights Reserved.
  • Classic Author
  • 12/28/2010 (Updated: 12/28/2010)
  • 33 Chapters
  • 248,524 Words
  • 442,643 Views
  • 171 Comments
  • Teen
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  • Action-Packed 7
  • Great Pacing 10
  • Great Characters 13
  • Character Growth 0
  • Dialog / Banter 0
  • Plot Twists 0
  • Beautiful Writing 0
  • Immersive World 6
  • Satisfying Ending 0
  • Fresh / Original 6
  • Counldn't Put It Down 5
  • Suspenseful 5
  • Gave Me Chills 1
  • Funny 2
  • Feel-Good 3
  • Heartwarming 0
  • Emotional Impact 5
  • Thought-Provoking 0
  • Romantic Chemistry 0
  • Smoldering Chemistry 7

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Table of Contents
  • P. Prologue
    • 3,725 Words
    • 23,442 Views
    • 6 Comments
  • 1. Chapter 1
    • 7,172 Words
    • 20,372 Views
    • 13 Comments
  • 2. Chapter 2
    • 6,815 Words
    • 13,671 Views
    • 3 Comments
  • 3. Chapter 3
    • 6,412 Words
    • 13,300 Views
    • 2 Comments
  • 4. Chapter 4
    • 7,468 Words
    • 12,740 Views
    • 4 Comments
  • 5. Chapter 5
    • 6,891 Words
    • 12,720 Views
    • 8 Comments
  • 6. Chapter 6
    • 10,114 Words
    • 11,946 Views
    • 3 Comments
  • 7. Chapter 7
    • 6,969 Words
    • 11,925 Views
    • 3 Comments
  • 8. Chapter 8
    • 8,407 Words
    • 15,570 Views
    • 4 Comments
  • 9. Chapter 9
    • 7,374 Words
    • 11,702 Views
    • 6 Comments
  • 10. Chapter 10
    • 6,822 Words
    • 12,270 Views
    • 5 Comments
  • 11. Chapter 11
    • 7,123 Words
    • 12,199 Views
    • 6 Comments
  • 12. Chapter 12
    • 13,827 Words
    • 11,970 Views
    • 5 Comments
  • 13. Chapter 13
    • 8,047 Words
    • 11,795 Views
    • 3 Comments
  • 14. Chapter 14
    • 6,938 Words
    • 12,115 Views
    • 5 Comments
  • 15. Chapter 15
    • 6,792 Words
    • 12,170 Views
    • 6 Comments
  • 16. Chapter 16
    • 6,977 Words
    • 11,721 Views
    • 3 Comments
  • 17. Chapter 17
    • 6,364 Words
    • 105,623 Views
    • 6 Comments
  • 18. Chapter 18
    • 6,537 Words
    • 11,215 Views
    • 4 Comments
  • 19. Chapter 19
    • 8,700 Words
    • 12,077 Views
    • 5 Comments
  • 20. Chapter 20
    • 10,927 Words
    • 12,340 Views
    • 3 Comments
  • 21. Chapter 21
    • 7,218 Words
    • 12,211 Views
    • 3 Comments
  • 22. Chapter 22
    • 8,678 Words
    • 12,715 Views
    • 4 Comments
  • 23. Chapter 23
    • 9,449 Words
    • 11,467 Views
    • 4 Comments
  • 24. Chapter 24
    • 7,918 Words
    • 11,569 Views
    • 5 Comments
  • 25. Chapter 25
    • 8,524 Words
    • 11,785 Views
    • 4 Comments
  • 26. Chapter 26
    • 6,370 Words
    • 12,076 Views
    • 8 Comments
  • 27. Chapter 27
    • 5,298 Words
    • 12,352 Views
    • 4 Comments
  • 28. Chapter 28
    • 8,354 Words
    • 12,400 Views
    • 4 Comments
  • 29. Chapter 29
    • 6,466 Words
    • 11,855 Views
    • 3 Comments
  • 30. Chapter 30
    • 6,147 Words
    • 12,064 Views
    • 5 Comments
  • 31. Chapter 31
    • 10,889 Words
    • 13,481 Views
    • 4 Comments
  • 32. Epilogue
    • 2,812 Words
    • 16,367 Views
    • 15 Comments

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seakinklets

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

The best of an already great author. Two protagonists try to manage their trauma and how it affects them, and grow from it, and its amazing to watch. The first book was similar in themes, but the protagonists had felt a bit too bland and clean. These two had very understandable reasons for how they acted, but it sure as shit doesn't excuse them. They are both fucked up people who did fucked up things because of the fucked up situations they were in, and god damn is it good to see them try and get over their shit. The characters are written so well, so real, and you truly find yourself empathizing with Dennis, who was an antagonist last book. The Long Way is a good read, and required for the full context of just how far things have come. Every single character changes, they learn and grow in understandable ways. Theres no big plot points or moments for me to point out, the whole thing is just so grounded that its compelling to read from front to back. If you at all liked The Long Way, you'll love this. If everything I said sounds appealing, its worth reading TLW just to get to this. Even if you didn't care for it, depending on your reasons, you might like this. Genuinely one of thr best books I've ever read, I'd buy it in paperback without hesitation.

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Jason Rimbaud

  

Though the cast of characters from The Lo(n)g Way make appearances, they are by no means necessary to the plot of In The Fishbowl. The worst parts of Owen & Aiden are muted as DomLuka focuses on the struggles of Travis Beltnick as he tries to navigate his growing feelings for an unavailable emotional train wreck. The behavior of the protagonist is believable as you slowly, sometimes painstakingly slow ,peel back the onion of a horrific past and his quest to become a better person. 

The plot is basically nonexistent, as this is a character study in trauma and the destruction it leaves when you make one bad decision. How a single action affects so many people is analyzed from every angle, the innocent, the guilty, the bystander, and those that love them all. 

Travis is one of the best characters I have ever read hands down and no matter what you might think about the subject matter, the author writes them all with charm, wit, humor, pain, and skill that draws you into this world where you relish every moment, except for any scene with Owen and Aiden, then DomLuka reverts back to angst for the sake of angst. 

I've read this story probably ten times over the last ten years and it's one of the few stories I still enjoy. And you don't need to read The Lo(n)g Way first to appreciate this sequel. 


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