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The Long Way 1. Long Way

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When a secret gets out and things unexpectedly go awry, Owen finds himself living with his twin brothers, an ideal situation for him. But not everything's perfect under the surface, and as he falls for his neighbor, makes new friends and learns to trust again it's a long road to making things right.

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  • Action Packed 3
  • Addictive/Pacing 7
  • Characters 6
  • Cliffhanger 2
  • Smoldering 1
  • Tearjerker 3
  • Unique 2
  • World Building 1

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Dodger

   6 of 6 members found this review helpful 6 / 6 members

You cannot go wrong with Dom Luka, and this is another fine example of his best work. It's an interesting set-up, with three young brothers sharing an apartment. Owen, the youngest and the main character, moves in with his two older brothers--who are identical twins that only he can tell apart--after being thrown out and beaten up by his parents. There are 30 long chapters to wade through, but a big cast of characters and plenty going on to keep you interested and wanting more. Highly recommended.   

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chessdude

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

This is by far one of the very best gay Coming Of Age/Romance stories ever written. I can't imagine why anyone would give this story less than 5 stars. It is one of Dom's very best, and a beautiful love story with very good and realistic character development. It is realistic and believable, yet still very intriguing and captivating. This is a must read for sure.

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Carlos Hazday

   3 of 4 members found this review helpful 3 / 4 members

You will laugh and you will cry. You will love and you will hate. And then you'll start on the second chapter.

 

I'm not a fan of teen angst and this story has it in spades. The author resorts to the old approach of making the main character oblivious to certain things in order to force the dramatic events and it's often cheesy. I spent most of the time wanting to slap Owen around because he was being so stupid. Characters not expressing their feelings is a cliche but once again it helps show how lack of communication is at the root of many relationship problems.

 

Fairly well written, the story would benefit from completing revisions the author acknowledged had begun. Too many misused words will make you cringe.

 

Wait! Don't run away. Even though he's stupid, Owen's an extremely likable character and so are Aiden, Tony, Chris, and most of the supporting cast. If my criticism above leaves you thinking I hated the story, you're wrong. This is the third time I've read "The Long Way."

 

Definitely worth a look.

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Higster

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   3 of 4 members found this review helpful 3 / 4 members

Great Story, currently on my third time reading it. Absolutely stunning work. In my opinion, if someone is new to this website and doesn't know where to start reading, this story is perfect for them as it really connects with the reader and has them continuously interested the more they read.

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