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Poetry (Short's) - 1. Chapter 1 Hearts

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Tonight hearts bleed
tonight voices call for love
tonight lovers cry for one another
tonight bodies lay cold in waiting for love
tonight I call and cry for I lay cold waiting for you

Tonight a heart brakes
tonight a heart bleeds for love
tonight a heart is broken cold, alone
tonight a heart beats slower, it beats a lone
tonight my heart brakes as it bleeds, it bleeds for you
tonight my heart is broken cold alone, slower it beats for no one

Pleas tell me what you think;~}
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
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There's a sort of grandeur in the way this poem builds from short lines to long ones - it reminds me in a way of a heartbeat. It's also a painful poem, but very nicely done!

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