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Painted Blue

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Sub-genres: Drama, General Romance

Dorian Chase is a thirty-three-year-old Detective in Narcotics Investigations. Felix is an eighteen-year-old runaway who knows exactly what--and who--he wants.
The rigid lines Dorian allows himself to live within start to blur as Felix's existence in his life gives him permission to discover who he is and what he wants.

My first story of its kind.  Also my first story posted for public consumption.  Feedback and comments welcome.
A note on BDSM:  Unless you are familiar with the "scene", whatever you think this story is going to be, it's not.  You'll find no coercion, manipulation, or disregard for autonomy here.  This is no "Fifty Shades of Gay".
Copyright © 2016 JackBinimbul; All Rights Reserved.

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  • 1. Chapter 1
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  • 2. Chapter 2
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  • 3. Chapter 3
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  • 4. Chapter 4
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  • 5. Chapter 5
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  • 6. Chapter 6
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  • 7. Chapter 7
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  • 8. Chapter 8
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  • 9. Chapter 9
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  • 10. Chapter 10
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  • 11. Chapter 11
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  • 12. Chapter 12
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  • 13. Chapter 13
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  • 14. Chapter 14
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  • 15. Chapter 15
    • 5,556 Words
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As I skimmed this first chapter, the story pulled me in. I like your characters, and they all have distinct personalities that feel 'real'. I would recommend that you review the Dialogue Punctuation topic in the Writer's Corner because that will help give your text the technical polish the well-written, plot-wise, the content needs.

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