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    jian_sierra
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  • 05/10/2011
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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My Gift To You - 2. A Promise

This is a little something I wrote today. Thanks Bleu :hug:

People chattering about everything

And nothing in particular

 

A cacophony of voices wanting attention

Yours and mine lost in the hubbub

 

A rigmarole unfolding before my eyes

Is this where I belong?

 

A heart searching for someone special

And another who yearns for the same

 

We started out as strangers who had nothing in common

Except for a shared dream of a life filled with love

 

Two hearts separated by miles upon miles of distance

Fate stepped in to bring us together

 

And so another tale of love begins anew

How it ends, well, that is for us to determine

 

The only thing I can promise you is this

I will do my best to make this work

 

I am willing to go the distance

If you are by my side

 

Out of all the wonders this world has to offer

I am glad that I was presented with the gift of love

 

I hope I make good use of this opportunity

Both for my sake and yours

Thanks for reading :)
Copyright © 2011 jian_sierra; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
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Frostina

awww.. I am late.. Bleu beat me to it! :P

 

lol

anyway, this poem can have just one review...

:2thumbs: All the VERY best guys! :2thumbs:

 

Emotions that run this deep deserves a happy ending, and i'm sure you're about to find out! and soon! ^_^

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K.C.

I wish you the best of everthing guys and all the wonderful joys of the world.

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jian_sierra
On 07/18/2011 01:50 AM, carringtonrj said:
how great to be able to watch such warm feelings finding their expression!
I'm not really a poet, just like writing poetry. Good to know people like you enjoying what I came up with :2thumbs:
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