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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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My Gift To You - 1. My Gift To You

This might seem a little corny (ok so it's a whole lot corny), but I wrote this yesterday as a gift to the person who recently made my days happier than it was. Thanks, Bleu. I'm glad we've met. MK

You were a friend among many

Kind, honest and supportive

Your words held a friendly note

But I shrugged it off as nothing

 

I was a naive storyteller

Who pretended I was a writer

My words were a bit awkward

But you liked them anyway

 

Words bloomed into feelings

Then turned into something more

Yours were known to you

Mine were in my subconscious

 

On an ordinary day like others

Something extraordinary happened

You reached out in a friendly gesture

I replied by sharing a part of me

 

Feelings that were hidden deep

Made themselves known to me

I saw you in a different light

Your inner beauty was captivating

 

Days passed, turning into months

I held a secret in my heart

A crush was borne out of words

Adoration directed toward you

 

I was not myself one night

Boldness and forwardness

Accompanied my words

Words I said to you

 

My feelings were confessed

You did not judge me

I was not pushed away

Truth was, you did nothing

 

My heart was set on running away

I was confused and a little hurt

But then you said you like me too

We were both speechless for a while

 

A week has gone by since then

Seven days I spent with you

We’re enjoying each other’s company

As we get to know each other more

 

On this somewhat special night

Let me present you with

The gift which is my words

Awkward though they maybe

 

I made this poem for you

With your beautiful smile

On my mind all the time

Hope you appreciate the effort...

Thanks for reading guys. Just to clarify, he made me post this.
Copyright © 2011 jian_sierra; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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WOW!

I'm so glad he did that!! :o its beautiful! and so so so sweet!!

 

:hug: to both of u! and oh well! :2thumbs:

Almost brought tears to my eyes! :) its so sweet! :)

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Thanks, Jian. Gift readily accepted and treasured... and I'll happily take the blame for you posting this. :hug: MK

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Lovely, John. :D That's really special. (also, thanks Bleu for making him share!!!) hehe.

 

The line I love most is: words bloomed into feelings. Though I really liked the smile on your mind part a lot too (well, the whole thing, but that lingers in my head).

 

Keep smiling the both of you. :)

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Truly beautiful and he shouldn't have to push you because this was worth letting everyone know about. Nicely done and carefully crafted.

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I can't think of two people who more deserve to be happy together.

 

I am so glad you posted the poem, the words, though simple, convey so much and it's just so beautiful.

 

I am so so so so so happy for you both.

 

:wub::wub:

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On 07/18/2011 01:49 AM, carringtonrj said:
sweet and heartfelt. great to be able to put strong feelings into words.
Awww thank you so much. I enjoy emotions a lot so glad to know you felt the emotions in this poem :)
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