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Not What You Think

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Jason and Derek are a couple that decide to spend a week camping in the mountains. It's not what Derek expected, and Derek is not quite what Jason expected either...

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  • 1. Chapter 1
    • 4,492 Words
    • 4,533 Views
    • 9 Comments
  • 2. Chapter 2
    • 3,918 Words
    • 4,024 Views
    • 6 Comments
  • 3. Chapter 3
    • 3,942 Words
    • 3,074 Views
    • 8 Comments
  • 4. Chapter 4
    • 2,557 Words
    • 2,652 Views
    • 7 Comments
  • 5. Chapter 5
    • 4,766 Words
    • 2,509 Views
    • 4 Comments
  • 6. Chapter 6
    • 4,172 Words
    • 2,619 Views
    • 4 Comments
  • 7. Chapter 7
    • 4,262 Words
    • 3,096 Views
    • 6 Comments
  • 8. Chapter 8
    • 4,788 Words
    • 2,086 Views
    • 4 Comments
  • 9. Chapter 9
    • 3,614 Words
    • 1,560 Views
    • 2 Comments

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Wow, I liked this story. Look forward to more.

And really, a cliff hanger at the end of each chapter?

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Not what you think! I guess not, sounds like Derrick is a Federal agent investigating a corporate spy agency. Although the death toll is a bit on the high side for that unless it was foreign based. The housekeeper will have quite a mess to clean up whistle.gif Looking forward to more, never knew you wrote Joe!

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From the shortest chapter yet to the longest chapter yet... ;) And yet, the readers are still left guessing. :)

 

Yeah, I'm wondering who's coming in that back door, too. How much more can Derek deal with in just one day? :o

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