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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Love I - 3. Breaking Point

I think I must surely break

my heart cannot possibly hold all this feeling

my head cannot possibly contain this intensity

anything I have ever felt for anyone

is insignificant compared to how I feel for you

just a pale shadow, a ghost, a whisper

as much a tease to my senses as

a sun shower compared to a thunderstorm

a single snow flake compared to a blizzard

a child’s breath compared to a gale-force wind

a candle’s flame compared to the surface of the sun

I think I must surely break

just as a dam must burst

when the river is too much to hold

my soul must surely shatter

from the sheer force

of the love I feel for you

Copyright © 2011 Luc; All Rights Reserved.
Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
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