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    Lugh
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Incarnations - 2. Living Evolution

Inside -- upside down

Topsy-turvy, spinning ‘round

Living on a life-line -- astronauts in space

Living evolution; creation’s slap in the face.

 

Tight little tummies tucked all in

Hiding faces, fingers, toes and skin

No one sees me, knows I’m here

 

No one believes till they’re gulping for air.

Praying to the porcelain gods –

Please, oh please, not me.

 

Secret found -- ultrasound

Thumpa-thump, sound so keen

Tiny thing the size of a bean

 

Oceans of lotions: hands, feet, face, back, belly

Some end in the name Jelly.

 

Kicking room gone

Toe stuck in a nostril

Lots of pressure,

Hard to spin, hard to turn

Hard to punch and kick

I don’t like this pressure.

 

 

Shoulders shoving, turtle-doving

Elbows, knees go to town

Right side up - upside down.

I really don’t like this pressure.

 

But I do like my nose being toe free.

Slippery sliding – gravity colliding

Warm and wet – shivers get

Turnin’ blue – a sneeze or two

What’s that wail? What the hell?

 

“It’s a boy! You have a son.”

Copyright © 2011 Lugh; All Rights Reserved.
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'what the hell' XD What a line, that makes that poem worth reading.

 

I might have more thoughts later when I'm in a different frame of mind. I'll tell you what I think then. Other wise this was quite Dull, mainly cause you didn't capture any of the raw emotion of the scean your depicting.

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And it's a boy!

 

Congrats :)

 

If the soul thought it was hard and scary to be born, wait until he lives a bit...

 

A good one. :)

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Well that was quite a ride. I have no idea what you were talking about on the first part of this poem, but I read on anyway as it is really entertaining (even a bit funny). Then the last line just explained everything I read. Very good thumbsupsmileyanim.gif

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LOL. I was like "What the-- ohhhhh." Hehe.

 

The beginning made me think of the lyrics to a Beatles song. Later Beatles, not the early peppy stuff.

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Really enjoyed this poem! The pictures that you paint with your words, whether in poetry or in your stories, are wonderful! Thanks hon for an enjoyable read!

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