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    Mark92
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Mark's Poem Archive - 4. The cubby hole

The Cubby Hole

It’s cold and dark; I’m wracked with pain,

Just asked for a hug and beaten again,

It’s a sin she screamed, you dirty lad,

You’re ugly, you’re a slug, you’re evil! Bad!

 

Through one eye I searched the floor,

For the raggy blanket I always wore,

It must be true the bible said,

If I’m all those things, I should be dead!

 

Why did she hate me? Why was she mad?

Was it all because I looked like my dad?

He raped her, and left, leaving nothing behind,

But a broken woman who went out of her mind!

 

It was my entire fault, I was her sin,

All I remembered was the pain I was in,

My face was a mess, all swollen and red,

From the fists she’d rained over face and head!

 

That time has now passed, and I am a man,

To get through each day the best way I can,

I try so hard to overcome my past,

But the moments are fleeting and quickly pass!

 

I must carry on, or the battle is lost,

The loss of a life is such a cost,

I must carry on I have a debt to repay,

To Luke, and to Sue and my friends on GA.

Copyright © 2012 Mark92; All Rights Reserved.
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Mark92
On 06/15/2011 04:19 AM, Foster said:
That breaks my heart.
Hugs Bugeye :) Thank you for reading :)
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Agaith

wow so powerful Marky, and such an honest window into your soul. I'm so glad GA is a good place for you! We love having you here ^_^:hug:

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Mark92
On 06/15/2011 04:31 AM, Agaith said:
wow so powerful Marky, and such an honest window into your soul. I'm so glad GA is a good place for you! We love having you here ^_^:hug:
Hey Stuby and thanks I asked about before posting it, cos i wasnt sure. thanks again *hugs* :)
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comicfan

For you Mark there is always comfort when you look to your friends. We want nothing more than to let you grow beyond the pain, into the man you are. We are here for your support, to love, and guide, and to be what you need. Now and always. :hug:

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Mark92
On 06/15/2011 06:51 AM, comicfan said:
For you Mark there is always comfort when you look to your friends. We want nothing more than to let you grow beyond the pain, into the man you are. We are here for your support, to love, and guide, and to be what you need. Now and always. :hug:
Aaawww Comic Thank you and you all mean so much to me.Thanks again :) torment you later :)
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Cailen

There are so many things that i could say to this chapter, there are so many emotions that come to the surface and that i just can't express fully, so i am going to revert to my standard review macro.

 

Cailen Poem Rating OVERALL: 10/10

Content: 10/10 Powerful and emotional

Flow: 10/10 rhythmic and dynamic

Poignancy: 9/10 honest and strong

Grammar: 10/10 well reviewed Frosty, good job.

 

You are Loved Mark, you are loved.

Cailen

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Mark92
On 06/15/2011 06:56 PM, Cailen said:
There are so many things that i could say to this chapter, there are so many emotions that come to the surface and that i just can't express fully, so i am going to revert to my standard review macro.

 

Cailen Poem Rating OVERALL: 10/10

Content: 10/10 Powerful and emotional

Flow: 10/10 rhythmic and dynamic

Poignancy: 9/10 honest and strong

Grammar: 10/10 well reviewed Frosty, good job.

 

You are Loved Mark, you are loved.

Cailen

Hey Cailen and thank you.Wasnt going to post it but hey ho . Thankyou :)
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Bumblebee

really intense Mark :hug: I'm not going to say I'm sorry about what has happened to you as I hate it when people say it to me,

but I know you can move on, your one of the strongest men I know :hug: Thankyou for sharing such a personal part of you with us

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Mark92
On 06/15/2011 11:56 PM, Bumblebee said:
really intense Mark :hug: I'm not going to say I'm sorry about what has happened to you as I hate it when people say it to me,

but I know you can move on, your one of the strongest men I know :hug: Thankyou for sharing such a personal part of you with us

Hey bee thankyou so much. It took a lot of soul searching before i posted it but glad i did thanks again :)
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