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    Mark92
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Mark's Poem Archive - 12. I Wish

Edit by Frosty Thankyou girl :) :hug:

I Wish

I wish I could be a true man,

And walk through that gate, I should, I can,

There are things to do and people to see,

Especially one, that’s so special to me.

To go through that gate, and walk down that track,

I would keep walking, without looking back,

So much to see, to learn and grow,

It’s so close to me now, just four steps to go.

I need to be with my one true love,

And as I look up at the sky above,

I cry: please be patient, baby please wait,

Just four more steps to get to the gate.

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Bumblebee
:hug: only 4 more steps hun, take your time, dont rush it, otherwise if something bad happens on the otherside you mightn't see that world through your own eyes.
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Mark92
On 09/06/2011 10:51 PM, Bumblebee said:
:hug: only 4 more steps hun, take your time, dont rush it, otherwise if something bad happens on the otherside you mightn't see that world through your own eyes.
Awww Bee thats so nice awwww i'm all choked uop now awww love you babes thank you :hug::wub:
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Johnathan Colourfield

AWWW :) Mark you can do it :) Four more steps, just take them one at a time. Doesn't matter if it takes 6 minutes, it doesn't even matter if it takes 6 months. We believe you can do it :):hug: just think of the reward afterwards. Simple yet beautiful poem :)

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K.C.

One step at a time! That's how we all walk through this world and we are waiting for you whenever you get to the gate!

 

 

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comicfan

Like anything life,Mark, it takes time. Eventually you will breeze through it and the be able to put the pain behind you. Take care. Remember you have many friends wishing you well and one man waiting for you. We just want you happy and able, not crushed because you forced yourself. :hug:

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Nephylim

Truly beautiful, and even more so for those who know what's behind it. Four steps is a long way when each one is over a chasm. Take your time. Take the pressure off, relax and know for absolute sure that when the time comes; whether it's this month, this year; there will be many many arms and hearts waiting for you on the other side

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Mark92
On 09/06/2011 10:59 PM, Johnathan Colourfield said:
AWWW :) Mark you can do it :) Four more steps, just take them one at a time. Doesn't matter if it takes 6 minutes, it doesn't even matter if it takes 6 months. We believe you can do it :):hug: just think of the reward afterwards. Simple yet beautiful poem :)
Thank you Johnathan and I will get there just because you all believe I can . Thanks again :):hug:
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Mark92
On 09/06/2011 11:51 PM, K.C. said:
One step at a time! That's how we all walk through this world and we are waiting for you whenever you get to the gate!

 

Aww man all these comments are truly lovely thank you KC :hug::)
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Mark92
On 09/07/2011 12:06 AM, comicfan said:
Like anything life,Mark, it takes time. Eventually you will breeze through it and the be able to put the pain behind you. Take care. Remember you have many friends wishing you well and one man waiting for you. We just want you happy and able, not crushed because you forced yourself. :hug:
I know, like I can't do it on weekends, because Lukey isnt here. I tried on my own and got scared before I got near it. Thanks Comic :hug::)
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Mark92
On 09/07/2011 12:51 AM, Nephylim said:
Truly beautiful, and even more so for those who know what's behind it. Four steps is a long way when each one is over a chasm. Take your time. Take the pressure off, relax and know for absolute sure that when the time comes; whether it's this month, this year; there will be many many arms and hearts waiting for you on the other side
Awww thank you i'm so choked up right now. I love you all too, :hug::wub::) thanks again :)
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