The Legacy

WOW! powerful and gripping start!

can't wait to see where you're going to take this!

On 05/29/2011 12:38 AM, Frostina said:

WOW! powerful and gripping start!

can't wait to see where you're going to take this!

I did wonder when you were going to post something.

Okay so this is trifling because it was a very good start - but "The room is lit by torches blazing on the walls, but no heat comes from them, no light, the same with the large log fire"

How can the torches light the room but give off no light?

Five years of research?? Holy crap ** Quickly goes to read chapter 1**

On 05/29/2011 02:23 AM, Andrew_Q_Gordon said:

I did wonder when you were going to post something.

 

Okay so this is trifling because it was a very good start - but "The room is lit by torches blazing on the walls, but no heat comes from them, no light, the same with the large log fire"

 

 

How can the torches light the room but give off no light?

 

Five years of research?? Holy crap ** Quickly goes to read chapter 1**

Well slavery is not what I was expecting. Hmm. Female slavery on top of it. You know I have to read on now Mark.

A nice opening and spooky.

On 05/29/2011 08:38 AM, comicfan said:

Well slavery is not what I was expecting. Hmm. Female slavery on top of it. You know I have to read on now Mark.

On 05/29/2011 11:58 AM, Foster said:

A nice opening and spooky.

On 08/16/2011 10:48 AM, Naptowngirl said:

cool... totally looking forward to the update, glad we don't have to wait too long...

A very interesting start. I have been meaning to read this story for a while and am bowing to pressure, not that I need any really, it's just time really. Loving the concept so far