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Moorpark Palms 2. Moorpark Palms

   (2 reviews)
Genres: Comedy,
Sub-genres: Comedy Modern

Jake's adventures continue in this funny book about the small Los Angeles apartment building he lives in.  It's full of hot young people who spend a lot of time nearly naked around the pool.  But they're often bonkers.

 

 

2015 Richard Eisbrouch

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  • Action-Packed 0
  • Great Pacing 0
  • Great Characters 1
  • Character Growth 0
  • Dialog / Banter 0
  • Plot Twists 0
  • Beautiful Writing 0
  • Immersive World 1
  • Satisfying Ending 0
  • Fresh / Original 1
  • Counldn't Put It Down 1
  • Suspenseful 0
  • Gave Me Chills 0
  • Funny 1
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Heartwarming 0
  • Emotional Impact 0
  • Thought-Provoking 0
  • Romantic Chemistry 0
  • Smoldering Chemistry 0
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pvtguy

pvtguy 21,644

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

Delightful story.  Even with minor grammatical errors, it was an easy read that allows the reader to feel as though present.

Response from the author:

Thanks.  And, yeah, I know:  I need to go back and proofread everything I've written.  Again.  Every time I think I've gotten it right, someone points out another typo.

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mate

mate 237

  

Living in a small apartment building seems to be similar to living in a small village: everyone thinks they know everyone's secrets and they still have to live together.

This is a hilarious and entertaining story of life in a barely maintained LA apartment building that is supposed in near future to be taken down. How the inhabitants manage thru several house managers and ownerships and constantly changing tenants and build their own small community.

Even if there is supposed to be no plot in this story, there is a lot of incidents and action, but above all the story is a description of human life.

I loved the story! Thank you for writing.

Response from the author:

Thanks.  And, as I've said, people who've read both the novel and the letters still think the letters are funnier, maybe because they're sometimes not as polite.  So if you're curious enough to go through the material again, maybe after a break, try the letters.  They don't have to be read all at once.  My friends got them at one a year.

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