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I love a well-written story that keeps interest from chapter to chapter. Intriguing characters and plot twists are especially important.
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What little interaction I have with AI currently (mainly the ones who answer phone calls to various services such as doctor offices, 'customer service' (a joke), etc), I have not been impressed. I have friends who work with it daily and consider it a very helpful and needed tool. I'm open to reading a story about how it could help us rather than destroy civilization or replace humans altogether. Of course, if it's a story by @Wayne Gray, I'm on board already!
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We are being introduced to some wonderful characters so far that are setting the stage for an even more delightful story!
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TOA = time of arrival in the ER. Well written chapter. The story is developing quite well.
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Delightful short story! Straight to the point without a ton of drama! And to @Daddydavek's concern: I don't think there will be much difficulty after a few tries, lol!
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You've already grabbed my interest: someone with a limitation that has learned to work around it and sound perfectly fascinating!
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Julian certainly can put Oliver at ease with just a few words! I am enjoying this story immensely!
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Miles has not let his inheritance to stray from his real values and his dealing with his own issues. His loyalty to Robbie is admirable. I truly love this story! I'm eager to see the forthcoming chapters!
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More houses & drawing a line
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in More houses & drawing a line
I do love this story. The place sounds perfect for the varied interests and needs. Encouraging Toby to continue his interest in all things natural may well help him determine his future occupation and studies. Russ should be able to finance the remodel on his portion. -
If the school knew of the hazing rituals, shame on them for not interfering. However, I know this would not push forward the story. I just hate all hazing rituals. The rituals described here raise the questions about Carl and his own self-image. Bullying, though despicable, exists everywhere in many forms. I'm glad Kurtis used his training for the purpose it is intended.
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And here is the raw truth of the brilliant writing that @kbois has done in this story: The characters must "speak" to the author in order that authentic dialogue can be done as it has been between Miles, Erik and Troy especially. @chris191070 pointed out: Owen left the relationship long before Troy even encountered Miles in Scotland! Emotional cheating or true realization of their relationship? This was one powerful chapter!
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Oliver and Julian really clicked! Great conversation, enjoyable eating, lots of sex and desire for more interaction! Another great Hugill story!
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Feelings are there for sure, but could they actually be happy together with their different interests? I guess we'll find out as the story progresses... Very captivating!
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I have totally enjoyed this volume of T'ville tales. I do look forward to future volumes, but am comfortable with the open ending to this one - it allows us to wonder and hope for future volumes! Excellent writing and story telling, @Mark Ponyboy Peters.
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Julian and Cliff have a relationship based, it seems, only on their shared uni experiences. With Garry in the picture, that relationship may wain... However, his relationship with Oliver is certainly gaining heat! I simply love how @Robert Hugill creates such descriptive scenes such that they seem so realistic!
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Stephanie is reacting in a very aggressive manner but I do believe that under that mantle of bitchiness is a fear-filled girl with very low self-confidence. Hopefullly, Cynthia's father is not a fire-and-brimstone preacher but one who lives a gospel-like love of people.
