pvtguy

Another fine story to add the the Hugillverse! This story has a wide range of characters, subplots, drama, and humor. Superb writing keeps one moving from chapter to chapter with easy flow. A must read!

I find this chapter not so much an ending as in all things wrapped up, but a stopping point where we see the possibility of the commune growing together in their individual crafts and talents as well as the "family" they have formed. Excellent writing and a thoroughly engaging story! I look forward to the next!

Bitterness can eventually damage relationships and the person himself if not dealt with. It's a shame that Phil ended in this manner, though his feeling of total abandonment from his family gave him no hope for the future. I always believe reconciliation is possible, though resumption of the former relationships would not have to be resumed. Forgiveness will ultimately be beneficial to all concerned. I find this a particularly sad chapter.

So, the Panther turd is returned to its proper place. The characters take central position, showing their growth as individuals and as a supportive group of friends. While I hate to see the story end, I am ready for more stories from the Hugillverse!

I agree with @drsawzall: I'm not ready for this story to end just yet (if ever, lol!). I truly couldn't care less if the Nimrud Panther was ever found! I would love to see the eventual dick-tionary!

I really hate to see this story end but guess it must. Might the Nimrud Panther be found during the small barn remodel? I think the collection of pictures would make a nice bonus to see...

The "mystery" of the lost item has certainly taken a backseat to this wonderful story of another growing community of supportive members! Great writing! And I second a story featuring Joss and PJ!

Nothing more to add after the wonderful comments made already! Brilliant writing and creativity, @Robert Hugill!

Stunningly beautiful! And if I may, I hope you realize how much you are loved too!

I second @CincyKris comment about Lewis and Charlie: their relationship is building slowly on a solid foundation of friendship. Both are learning to be vulnerable and real!

You have crafted a family that seems like our next-door-neighbors. Their wealth is used to provide top-tier experiences for all their guests without denying themselves a very comfortable home. Throughout, all their employees are considered equal and respected as such. This chapter illustrates this very pointedly in their discussions with all the various employees with whom they speak. That 10 years has passed since the origin of Belle Catherine seems like the blink of an eye! Great writing and story telling!

Loving the "growing pains" in the community: learning boundaries and respect for each other. Wonderfully warm chapter!

A delightful chapter! Things are coming together nicely for the community - but knowing that they may never know the full extent of the crime network and accepting that fact.

I love the mixing of real places and events with the fictional ones. It provided a nice vicarious day-trip on an otherwise mundane day here. I believe that Tom is truly trying to be his own man rather than his step-dad's son. It might seem a bit late in life to become independent, but it truly isn't! He has found an accepting community where he is allowed and encouraged to be himself and supported all along the way!

And I get that! I really do!