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Weathered - 1. Anthology Poem One

Weathered

Foster
 
 
 
A down pour of sunshine
Fun time
Has me on the run
A tickling wind
Sickening sin
Perturbs me
 
I’m not that easy
Any more
Outside of breeze
And blue sky and white cloud
The day couldn’t get worse
This clarity of horizon
Expands my isolation
Discontented
Desolation
Pointless
My destination
 
Grounded with fright
This light
The sight
Of blight
Bright spectrum specters
Flowers and birds
Bees and things
Getting busy
Goddamn misery
 
I want
A little thunder
A little lightening
Ominous omens
A world reflective
I want some passionate destruction
Amen
 
You manage sometimes
To make me rumble
Feel your static
The approaching
Potential doom
Full of garlic bread
Your breath mayonnaise
Staring startled
Beating the spoon
Against my last shelter
You know the buzz I feel
Hate me for it
But I know
You want to surrender
You want me to take
I want you to swallow
Softy I think
I should love
But the scratch
Drives me
Quickened
Is this moment
Too much to ask
 
 
 
 
 
 
4.10.14 Anthology entry
 
Copyright © 2014 Foster; All Rights Reserved.
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Ashi

A little food of love will warm the soul. Those words are nice foods for thought. Great one, Mr. Foster.

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Cole Matthews

The feeling this poem gives me is "conflicted." I feel quite torn from the character's unsure yet very strong emotions. Yeah, it's really interesting and thought provoking. I really like it. Thanks for the great work!

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Bill W

Interesting descriptions and unique images. Definitely paints an intriguing picture of what's going on.

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nostic

Foster,

Actually you have the right to ask for more. I like your words, they're angry and then they don't care like nothing never bothered them, they mock and in the end they beg. Thank you.

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LJH

An absorbing work. The sexual nuance is pronounced. But I didn't understand the reference to food.

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comicfan

Sam, you seem to want out of the expected. No sunshine and simplicity but offer up some thunder and destruction. A poem of change and chance to escape but to what?

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On 05/04/2014 01:50 PM, comicfan said:
Sam, you seem to want out of the expected. No sunshine and simplicity but offer up some thunder and destruction. A poem of change and chance to escape but to what?
Thank you for reading Wayne and taking the time to comment. A poem wears a different expression for every reader. It can even be closed and remote to one and revealing and shocking to another. I don't plan out my poems I have no motive except to be in someway "satisfied" by making something I think has value. They are what they are.
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On 05/02/2014 06:13 PM, LJH said:
An absorbing work. The sexual nuance is pronounced. But I didn't understand the reference to food.
Thank you for reading Louie. I'm a sexy guy, so I am just full of nuance :P The food reference, I don't know if I told you what I was thinking if it would help you see where it fits if it fits. I rather you have your own thoughts about the poem good or bad.
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On 05/02/2014 06:00 PM, aditus said:
No sunshine and unicorns but lightning and thunder. I love it.
Thank you Aditus. I remember your comment about my "unicorn picture" I posted some time ago. :P
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On 05/02/2014 02:37 PM, nostic said:

Foster,

Actually you have the right to ask for more. I like your words, they're angry and then they don't care like nothing never bothered them, they mock and in the end they beg. Thank you.

Thank you Nostalgic. I like your comment.
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On 05/02/2014 01:58 PM, Bill W said:
Interesting descriptions and unique images. Definitely paints an intriguing picture of what's going on.
Thanks Bill. I always wanted to be a real painter.
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On 05/02/2014 08:47 AM, Cole Matthews said:
The feeling this poem gives me is "conflicted." I feel quite torn from the character's unsure yet very strong emotions. Yeah, it's really interesting and thought provoking. I really like it. Thanks for the great work!
Hey Cole, thanks for reading and making a comment. I tend to be governed strongly by emotion to the dismay of all the logical in the world... I know it takes both. My emotion is logical to me.
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On 05/02/2014 06:46 AM, carringtonrj said:
you have an interesting way with words. some interesting images. a good piece. thanks for sharing.
Thanks for reading Carrington. I like words more than what they say.
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On 05/02/2014 06:32 AM, Ashi said:
A little food of love will warm the soul. Those words are nice foods for thought. Great one, Mr. Foster.
Thank you Ashi. This food is probably fast food then because I only took a few minutes to prepare.
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On 05/02/2014 05:32 AM, joann414 said:
"passionate destruction". Now that's food for thought. I love this Sam. :read::worship:
Thank you JoAnn. Your support seems neverending. Thank you for me and the many others you give it too.
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