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An Occasional Curveball 5. The Chosen

   (2 reviews)
Genres: Comedy, Romance,
Sub-genres: Comedy Modern, General Romance

15,000 years ago, Emrys decides to tell people that he and Amderion are together. No one is surprised. He's not happy.

A short story that takes place back in Atlantis. Can be read after Heaven's Trumpet.
Copyright © 2018 xTony; All Rights Reserved.

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  • Great Pacing 1
  • Great Characters 2
  • Character Growth 0
  • Dialog / Banter 0
  • Plot Twists 0
  • Beautiful Writing 0
  • Immersive World 2
  • Satisfying Ending 0
  • Fresh / Original 2
  • Counldn't Put It Down 1
  • Suspenseful 1
  • Gave Me Chills 1
  • Funny 1
  • Feel-Good 1
  • Heartwarming 0
  • Emotional Impact 1
  • Thought-Provoking 0
  • Romantic Chemistry 0
  • Smoldering Chemistry 1
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ChillFire

ChillFire 70

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

15,000 years ago, Prince Emrys decides that it’s time to tell everyone that he’s now dating Admerion.

It does not go as he expected.

What I Loved

If the events depicted in this short were to happen in the present day, I’m pretty sure it would go in a very similar direction. Goes to show how everyone is still largely the same, despite the time gap. I always found the whole “two people but still one” thing to be very well executed throughout the entire series.

I quite enjoyed the ongoing gag with the starship naming.

What Could’ve Been Better

I have nothing to criticize. Yes, really.

Miscellaneous Thoughts

Interesting (but also completely unsurprising) that Apollo had eyes for Aurek all this time. Wonder why he never acted on his feelings before his reincarnation.

Emrys sure does have a dramatic flair underneath all the regality, eh? Guess that’s where Chad got it from.

Verdict

A cute little side story. If you’ve read other books in the series, then you’ll enjoy this as well.

5 stars.

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