ShadowDancer

What about the Hawaii house that Will bought? He never goes there anymore. If he needs or wants to just get away to think on what he should or shouldn't do about Zach, Brad or anybody else send him to the 4 million dollar house he bought. Or does Brad have his hand in that too? If I remember when Brad signed the papers the house was put in a trust but you (Mark) never mentioned what trust or who's trust. Will (in my opinion) needs to confront Zach then walk away.

Chapter 17 Monday Night Heath walked out of the kitchen when he heard Rob’s truck pull into the driveway. “Hi Dad,” Rob said as he walked into Heath’s house. “Hi Rob, David. Have you had dinner yet?” “Yep, David cooked us dinner. Are we interrupting your dinner?” “No, I am waiting on Steve to get here, and then we can eat. David let me get your truck key, I will be right back.” Rob and David sat on the couch. “I feel like we are interrupting his plans.” David said looking at Rob. “We w

Thank you for your comment and thoughts. When I started this little story I was wondering if I was going to get it right or not. I don't have any family or friends using meth that I know of, so I am kinda going with what I read about and have watched on TV. Any input would be great help. Thanks again.

‘Here we go again!’ I was thinking when I walked in the house and closed the door seeing my mother standing there. “Here.” She was holding her hand out with some cash in it. “What is that for?” “You need to go and meet Robbie. He will be at Smity’s in half hour.” She crammed the money in my front pocket. “Why?” “Because I said so.” “That is not a reason.” “I don’t have to give you a reason, young man.” “If you want me to do something that could get me in trouble, then I think I deserve a

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Chapter 6 I walked off with Chance and Jarrod; we went in the doors of the school. “Chance, let’s go in the restroom and see if we can get you cleaned up a little before the bell rings for class.” I walked in the restroom, got some paper towels, wet them down for Chance and handed them to him. I watched him clean his gorgeous face and saw that there was a bruise starting on his cheek. “You might end up with a bruise on your cheek. Jarrod, do you have an extra shirt in your locker?” “Ya, I

Chapter 5 After my last class, I walked slowly to my locker not looking forward to the conversation with Jarrod. I went out the big doors and saw Jarrod and Chance standing at the gate. I walked over there and all three of us took off heading home, I didn’t say anything to either one. If they want to talk then they would have to bring it up, not me. Jarrod looked at me and bumped my shoulder to get attention. “Yes?” I said to him. “You said you would talk to him so start talking,” Jarrod wh

Chapter 4 I must have fell asleep because the next thing I knew, my mom was knocking on my door telling me that Jarrod was on the phone. “Hey what’s up?” “Nothing, just wanted to let you know that Chance called and asked me to go to the movies with him and a couple other guys from school. I know we had something planned today but I was hoping you would be ok if I passed on going to the arcade with you,” Jarrod said to me. I got pissed off but I didn’t let him know it. “Sure go have fun

Chapter 3 “Do you have a problem with me? You were all smiles at the mall but now you have a sour look on your face when you look at me.” Chance looked at me with a wrinkled forehead as if he is trying to figure something out. “No I don’t have a problem with anybody.” I stepped over his foot and walked out of the classroom. I went to my locker to put my backpack in it, and then I walked over to the cafeteria and got in line. I looked around and saw Jarrod already sitting at our normal table

I must have missed something. What happened to the papers that Sean was filing on Zach's parents. Will and Zach talked to Sean on a wed (hope that is right) and the papers were being filed the next day but then Zach, Will, JP and the rest of the gang was in the plane on fri and there no mention of the papers and what happened when Wally got them. Not complaining in any way cuz your story is great and I don't miss any chapter, as matter fact I am rereading them all for the second time. I am just wondering if I missed something or if you have it maybe planned out that when they get into Claremont it will come to light. Keep putting out them chapters, totally enjoy reading and keeping up with the story line.

Update Just a note for my readers of Big Sky. I am in the process of re-editing all ten chapters. I will be continuing to write the story at a later date. I am finishing up with my other open stories first. Big Sky was the first story I had ever written and it is dear to my heart. I know how I want it to go in the story line, know I just need to find the time to finish it. Please be patent with me and keep a look out for the next chapter. Thank you for reading and all the messages I hav

Chapter 16 Rob walked back into the kitchen as his cell phone was ringing. “Hello…Ya it is working…What’s up?…ok hold on…” Rob put his phone on speaker so David could hear him too. David moved the skillet off the burner and sat at the table with Rob. “Ok it is on speaker and David is here next to me.” “Hello David, feeling any better?” “Ya, still a little sore but doing better, thanks.” “Ok the reason I want both of you to hear this is because I heard from Eric. First, about your da

Chapter 2 “I don’t know yet. All I could find out is that he was complaining of chest pains so your grandma called an ambulance for him. Let’s just go so we can find out more. Grab your backpack and you can do your homework while we are at the hospital,” Mom told me, walking out and making sure the door was locked. When Mom and I got to the hospital, my dad was waiting for us in the waiting room. I sat down in the chair next to my dad listening to him. “Mom is back there with him, they

Zane is in the closet with only his best friend knowing about his secret until someone new shows up. The only problem is that this person brings his problems with him and has Zane help him. Will they come out unscathed in the end?

Chapter 1 “Hey Mom, can I go to the mall with Jarrod?” I asked coming into the house, Jarrod following me in. “Only if you promise to have your homework done first,” Mom said, walking out of the kitchen. “Mom, I only have math tonight. Can I do it when I get back please?” I looked at her with pleading eyes. Mom walked up to us saying. “Be back in two hours.” Since the mall was only four blocks away, it was easy to walk to. “Ok, thanks.” “Hey man, put your backpack next to mine and you c