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February CSR Discussion: All We Have Now by David AB


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How's February treated everyone? I know it's the shortest month of the year, but it feels like it can't possibly have already passed this quickly! But, it has, and today is the discussion day for David AB's All We Have Now. Did you get a chance to read or re-read this story posted back in 2015? Make sure you gave the author a few likes, comments, or even share your thoughts and questions below. David's going to pop in as he can today, so let's encourage him to share more stories by sharing how much you enjoyed this month's read! First we have my interview with him, of course! 

 

Are you a person who makes their bed in the morning, or do you not see much point?  

Not in the morning, because when I wake up I'm more corpse than man and it usually takes me a few hours before I manage to lure my soul back into my body with an unreasonable amount of caffeine and nicotine. I do make my bed at some point though, but only so I can just collapse onto it and pass out comfortably at night.

   

If you had 30 minutes of free time, what would you do?

Maybe lie down on my couch and read the news or google random stuff. (That's just the least inappropriate answer I could think of though, so who knows what I might do, haha.)

   

What brought you to the GA?

Serendipity.

   

Many authors like to write in genres they enjoy reading. Do you have a favorite post-apocalyptic story or book you’d like to recommend?  

Well, Cormac McCarthy's "The Road" is by far the best post-apocalyptic novel (aside from "All We Have Now" of course, haha) and one of the best books in general I've ever read, but I don't think I would recommend it to anyone, because it's emotionally devastating and I kind of wish I had never read it myself to be honest.

 

(I know it's a bit tacky to promote my own stuff, but if you've enjoyed reading "All We Have Now", I did write another apocalypse-themed (short) story called "To Last". I can definitely recommend that one, haha.)

   

If the apocalypse hit and you survived, where would you go to live?

I love my apartment, so I'd probably stay right where I am. (I would've answered "IN A SPACESHIP!!! O.O" However, I'm assuming there would be no more Google after an apocalypse, so to find a spaceship I'd have to drive around aimlessly and hope that I'd happen to come across a spaceship-parking lot or whatever. That just doesn't sound like a lot of fun to me, especially not if I could be lying on my couch instead, doing who knows what, haha.)

    

Did the characters or the plot come to you first for All We Have Now?

This is probably not something I should openly admit as an "aspiring" writer, but I don't really care about plots all that much in general, I'm mainly interested in characters and their interactions and development. To answer the question though, the setting "came to me" first. At the time I loved "The Walking Dead", so I decided that I wanted to basically write a more intimate, gay version of that show. After the setting I "developed" the characters, came up with a whole bunch of "moments"/scenes to get a proper feel for them and finally I used those "moments" to roughly map out the basic plot of the story.

   

How did you flesh out your world? Did you plot out the events and the settings as an overall “this is the world now” or did you include the post-apocalyptic elements as they came to you while you wrote?

  Before I started writing "All We Have Now" I already knew what I wanted the world and all the different locations to look and "feel" like and how realistic or rather "unrealistic" I wanted the story to be, but I only outlined the plot very roughly and let the characters heavily inform most of my decisions on what should happen between all the abovementioned "moments", so consequently I did keep adding new elements throughout the story. I also kept researching every little detail, which made me change and add a bunch of stuff as well.

 

One example is the [spoiler-alert] farm-chapter(s) – originally I wanted Cody and Troy to stay in the house, but the problem was that dead bodies had been decomposing in there for quite a while and I had planned for them to do a poop-ton of cleaning and bleaching etc., but when I arrived at that chapter I did a lot of research on crime scene cleaning and things of that nature and I soon had to realize that there was absolutely no way that they could realistically get rid of that corpse-stench, at least not in a day and without proper equipment. So I scrapped that idea and let them find the RV instead, which I had originally decided against, because I thought it would feel too similar to "The Walking Dead". However, in my opinion "Book 2" (which is set almost exclusively in the RV) turned out far better than both "Book 1" and "Book 3", so in hindsight I'm quite happy that corpses reek much worse than I ever could've imagined, haha.

   

Do you have a favorite scene or moment in All We Have Now you can share with readers?

I know the whole thing drags on for way too long and probably isn't nearly as funny as I'd like to believe it is, but the chapter in which [spoiler-alert] they get stoned out of their minds was such a blast to write and there's one line in particular that I immediately had to think of: At one point Troy is wondering whether they could make [potato] chips themselves and then he lists all the stuff they have, but he's high, so he lists both "oil" and "canned potatoes" twice without realizing it. (Here's the line: "Hey, wait a minute, we have canned potatoes, oil, spices, oil, a pen, canned potatoes and a camping stove, we could make chips ourselves," he said.) The thing is, when I wrote that line I didn't do that on purpose, I simply listed "canned potatoes" twice by accident, probably because I was tired at the time. When I realized what I had done I laughed so hard, because it was exactly the kind of mistake you'd expect a stoned person to make, so it fit perfectly and became one of my favorite jokes in the whole story, even though it was just a lucky accident.

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I know I began reading this story, and I thought it well-written and clever. But I think it depressed me too much at the time to keep reading, which is all on me and nothing to do with the story. I'm simply not that keen on post-apocalypse scenarios. :no: 

But I love your Rhino and Mouse series, and No Banging. I heartily recommend them. :yes: 

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Since you're here, can I ask if you'll post more chapters for No Banging ? And did you ever see the story comment I wrote? ;) 

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1 hour ago, Timothy M. said:

Since you're here, can I ask if you'll post more chapters for No Banging ? And did you ever see the story comment I wrote? ;) 

 

Actually, I did write and publish a "sequel" called "No Banging: Vol. 2", but it was quite awful, so I had it deleted.

 

And yes, I do remember, I was quite flattered and you know what, after thanking you I asked you if you would be interested in beta-ing All We Have Now for me and it just occurred to me that if you hadn't said no I probably wouldn't have met one of the greatest people of all time O.O So, thank you for that too ;-)

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I'm sorry to say I didn't have a chance to read the story this month.  :facepalm: Unfortunately, I just haven't been reading as much as I used to.  I enjoyed reading the interview, though.  And I do like post-apocalyptic stories.  So I will add this to my ever-growing list.  :)  

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Sorry I'm late for this. Hey, David... remember me? I read the entire series and loved it. Some day, I might just delve into it again. :)  I enjoyed the interview... both the questions and the responses. Cheers... Gary....

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6 hours ago, DavidAB said:

And yes, I do remember, I was quite flattered and you know what, after thanking you I asked you if you would be interested in beta-ing All We Have Now for me and it just occurred to me that if you hadn't said no I probably wouldn't have met one of the greatest people of all time O.O So, thank you for that too ;-)

 

LOL, I'd forgotten about that. But I'm glad my refusal to beta (mostly because I only edit) was a good decision for you too. :) 

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