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Authors must beware of what they may think of as a deft turn of phrase. If it works, fine. If not, it may be seen as anything from pretentious to provencial. When in doubt, don't.

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Funny thing about words you don't use very often, or ones that you rarely encounter in your readings. In Philip K. Dick's short story "Small Town," Verne Haskel is busy redoing the city of Woodland in his model railroad layout. Reimagining the city of his birth into an idealized version that satisfies his twisted ego. "His deft hands were assembling a lovely little Langendorf Bread Factory."

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