I need some help. yes, I know what you are thinking, and I am not talking about guy's in white coats and one of those jakets that make you hug yourself .

here is the problem, I have major issues about Jeff and John getting together...at least sexually I have never written a sex scene and am very nervous about it. well, I say writing prompt number 12, and just had to do something ...I still can't believe I did it

Anyway, I really need some feadback on what I posted there...click here to read

please come back and leave your comments Thanks

Hugs,

Tom