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Busted chapter 52


Chris just watched Joe dumbly as he walked past him and into the living room. It was like he owned the place. That felt natural. It also annoyed him a little.

 

"What are you doing?" he asked.

 

"Sitting," Joe called back.

 

Chris moved to follow and found Joe in the recliner.

 

"What are you doing there?" Chris asked.

 

"If I sit on the couch, I'm going to be next to you," Joe answered. "If I'm next to you I'm going to touch you, which means I'm going to be kissing you, and from there

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TheZot

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I've actually run out of bits, so it may be a few days before the next part. Or not, as it's at ~1K words, but I'm not sure when I'll get it done, exactly.

B1ue

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It's a good palce to stop, in any case. I liked Joe's final speech, there.

Trebs

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Even without "sex" - this scene TOTALLY made me hard...

 

So passionate - so... mature... Was just a GREAT scene

Lucy Kemnitzer

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Trebs is right about this scene. It has everything a love scene should have, and it's geared right there to the fact that these are grown men.

 

Can they make Alex stop without his cooperation? Is it as simple as Chris embracing his whole self?

TheZot

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I'm honestly not sure if they can make Alex stop. He may have more independence than they want to think. Or he may not. It could easily go either way. Luckily there's not enough time left in the story for me to have to worry about it.

 

And thanks all for the kind words. All the weirdness and contrivance aside, I've been trying to keep this real. Hyper-sexed highschool or college kids or absurd fantasies are fine, but I've been feeling the urge for 'normal' romance. Probably means I need to get out more... (Okay, get out at all :) )

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