When I first met mike

[Sparhawk]

You know, some of the best stories I have found recently have been in the beggining section at Nifty. Not long ago, Comise asked us about the hook, or the grabbing idea of a story. Well this one really is different, it hooks you right away and keeps your attraction, at least it sure does mine.

 

The story is wrote by "DS Elliot" and he has done a wonderfull job. I hope that it continues for many more chapters. After the first couple of chapers he ends each one as it could be the complete story. He has done an excellent job with this. This is one that you each need to check out for yourselves.

 

When I first met Mike

 

Good read folks, worth at least five books

[Crackerwriter]

I've only read the first chapter yet, but this seems like a very well writen story that makes you want to read more.

 

A sad beginning though. but I hope this will turn into a happier phase in chapter 2