Bitter Remains

[Jason Rimbaud]

Check out my new short story called Bitter remains.

 

https://www.gayauthors.org/efiction/viewstory.php?sid=473

 

No matter how hard Justin tried to numb the memories, the bitterness remained.

 

 

Jason R.

[Ieshwar]

Damn, that was a depressing story.

 

I really don't know what to feel about Justin. While reading the story, I do feel sorry for him. He was human after all. But when I think of Daniel, I believe that he got what he deserved.

 

I really don't know what to think.

 

Take care,

Ieshwar

[Jason Rimbaud]

All too true, this part is very depressing. But maybe in future installments the characters will begin to take shape. After all, this is basically the beginning. Thanks Ish

 

Jason R.

[sat8997]

Okay, I'm going along with Ieshwar that it was depressing. But beautifully written nonetheless. I'm not sure who I feel sorry for the most, the serial cheater or the serial forgiver.

 

Sharon