Jason Rimbaud Posted December 1, 2007 Posted December 1, 2007 And here's another short and sweet poem just for Camy. Passive Aggressive By: Jason R. Written September 15th, 2002 I
AFriendlyFace Posted February 26, 2008 Posted February 26, 2008 I like the rhyme scheme! It does have a short, to the point, cheeky sort of desperation to it. Nice job!
Menzoberranzen Posted February 27, 2008 Posted February 27, 2008 A very nice piece, Jason. Similar to some of your other works, but as Kevin said, the rhyme scheme changes the feel of the poem slightly. It walks a fine line between despair and 'cheeky desperation' and it does it very well. I'm not sure I see the title reflected in the words, though. Menzo
Ieshwar Posted February 29, 2008 Posted February 29, 2008 I felt as if the narrator was taunting (or something like that) the other guy. I really liked the rhyme. God knows how you guys do it. Well-done. Take care, Ieshwar
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