C James Posted March 25, 2008 Author Share Posted March 25, 2008 Review by TL The Writing Tiger On the edge of society and worrying about staying alive is an adequate description of this one. The character is seeking refuge, using masks and shadows to hide. Will he survive, or will he pay the price? I was definitely intrigued by the format. I was on the edge, wondering what delights and woes the journal would reveal unto me. This one is deliciously dark. Read it if you dare! Link to comment
moonwolf Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 I love the way you wrote that story... it was realy fun to edit Great work Faust Link to comment
Site Administrator Graeme Posted March 31, 2008 Site Administrator Share Posted March 31, 2008 It's a great little story. The mixture of journal entries with newspaper articles is very well done. There are a few things left unsaid, such as how the protagonist is constantly found, even after he removed the tracking device (common sense says he would have searched for other such devices after discovering the first one), but that's minor. I love the ending... almost Link to comment
faust Posted March 31, 2008 Share Posted March 31, 2008 Thank you to you both. I just wanted to do something here that I have never seen done and from my P.O.V. I think it was well worth the time and effort. I mostly wanted the character to be portrayed as human as possible. I wanted him to be vulnerable and distressed. and follow the entire range of emotions I would expect to feel if i was running for my life. But I thank you for reading and giving feedback. and you too moonwolf. I thank you for helping me to produce the story Link to comment
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