corvus Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 So imagine Harry bedding his younger self and discovering, much to his dismay, that he's a lousy lay. I'm really enjoying the story, Corvus. It's just that my mind is wandering waiting for the next chapter. lol, that'd be hilarious! Hmm, it's enough to make me want to write it in... Anyhow, here's chapter 5. Read and review, please! Link to comment
Libby Drew Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 Loved chapter 5! Masterful, the way this is unfolding. Harry hasn't escaped anything. He's more trapped than ever. More, please! Link to comment
Procyon Posted August 14, 2009 Author Share Posted August 14, 2009 Great, great chapter. It's turning into a complete page-turner, only there aren't any more pages to turn right now... very frustrating. I love it that Harry manages to stay cool the whole time, with the police, about the money, everything -- right up until the lecture, when everything turns into a right mess... Haha poor guy. But on the other hand Berryman's back, although, come to think of it, that might turn out to be rather stressful for Harry as well. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter... Link to comment
Conner Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 I'm anxious to meet pre-world saving Berryman. Should be a treat. Maybe "this world" doesn't need saving? That would suck! Why does it seem that Harold is fading into the background already? Along with the professor? I want answers, Corvus! :2hands: Link to comment
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