Blind Sensations

[ricky]

Earlier I said that the story had depth and some rather important themes and messages. Having finished what was advertised as Part 1, my opinion has only solidified. (That was not a pun.) The treatment of blindness from so many perspectives was eye-opening. (Yes, that was a pun.) The contrast between vision and smell (for example, during the purchase of swimming suits) was adroit and quite instructional. The story contains knee-slapping humor and gut-wrenching pathos. Add a little magic (or ESP), and you've got an enchanting mixture.

 

Thanks, Part two is to come. I may have to figure out how to do the series thing. It may be easier to just add chapters to the existing. We'll see.

 

But thanks!

[paya]

Thanks, Part two is to come. I may have to figure out how to do the series thing. It may be easier to just add chapters to the existing. We'll see.

 

But thanks!

 

Yeah, adding chapters seems to work right now. We'll see after the upgrade of the e-fiction system.

 

 

We'll get our fix!

[ricky]

Part 2 A New Adventure Chapter 2 has been posted

[ricky]

Blind Sensations Part 2 CH 03 is now posted

[ricky]

Blind Sensations - A New Adventure CH 04 Has been posted

[ricky]

Blind Sensations A New Adventure CH 05 has been posted.

[ricky]

Chapter 6 has been posted

[ricky]

Chapter 07 of A new Adventure has been posted

[Nephylim]

And it's a great one. There is a lot in there. It gets very deep while keeping the 'feel' light. I think there is a lot in there to think about. Nice work

[ricky]

And it's a great one. There is a lot in there. It gets very deep while keeping the 'feel' light. I think there is a lot in there to think about. Nice work

 

Thanks so very much. Now, quick like a bunny, off to bed before the evil sun comes up. You know you don't tan, you burn!

 

Hugz

 

r

[ricky]

Blind Sensations A New Adventure - CH 08

 

The Final Chapter

[kevduenas]

good read

[Richardson]

Great read.

[Richardson]

good read

[Eric]

Great story!