Sadness and Joy

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Title: Sadness and Joy Reviewer: Liukas Soli

 

TJ - that was excellent! So sad yet so moving! Very well done!

Date: 12/06/2010 06:02 AM [Respond]

 

 

 

 

Title: Sadness and Joy Reviewer: Agaith

 

This is incredible TJ and this is why I sometimes prefer poetry it shows the heart and soul more profoundly than a story. Hope this isnt you in the poem. Excellent poem Tj well done

Date: 12/03/2010 08:24 AM [Respond]

 

 

 

 

Title: Sadness and Joy Reviewer: Quonus10

 

TJ, we talked about this, but let me add my comment here too.

First this is heart wrenching, the emotions you put into this is

moving. Second, you are very talented, clearly when moved you can

channel your feeling in a way that reaches people, please keep at it.

Last if this is in anyway how you feel, I swear to you, it will get

better. Nothing is ever as bad as it seems. There are so many options

for people as beautiful and talented as you. Never lose sight of that.

Date: 12/02/2010 09:23 PM [Respond]

 

 

 

 

Title: Sadness and Joy Reviewer: Nephylim

 

It happens too often. This is so very powerful. It should be

distributed generally to all parents, especially those of gay children

so they can see the results of their actions. Parents in situations like

this should be charged with criminal offences Maybe if they did then

there would be no more.Author's Response: Thanks

Nephylim, I totally agree. Parents need to wake up and see that their

words and actions have impacts far greater than they could ever think.

Date: 12/02/2010 02:17 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Sadness and Joy Reviewer: bugeye

 

Powerful and challenging.Author's Response: Thanks sam

Date: 12/02/2010 02:37 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Sadness and Joy Reviewer: Kavrik

 

So beautiful and so sad. My heart goes out to anyone that feels the

way the narrator of this poem feels. I found this to be incredibly

moving.Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it

Date: 12/02/2010 12:59 AM