Frostina Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 Frosti! I freaking love you! This story was incredible. I almost had a heart attack when I found out that Eric and Paul were the same person. But seriously congratulations. Thanks!!!! U r too sweet!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! Link to comment
Foopy Posted March 21, 2011 Share Posted March 21, 2011 wowowowowowowowow!!! This is SOOOO amazing!!! i can't even begin to say what i liked about it, cause it's EVERYTHING!!!! The way you wrote it i was convinced he had a twin that he was separated from at birth and met up with after his parents died or something. I like how he has a headache at the beginning, cause it makes it clear (now) that he was the one partying... And to be gay and have a homophobic split... just wow! Link to comment
Frostina Posted March 21, 2011 Share Posted March 21, 2011 wowowowowowowowow!!! This is SOOOO amazing!!! i can't even begin to say what i liked about it, cause it's EVERYTHING!!!! The way you wrote it i was convinced he had a twin that he was separated from at birth and met up with after his parents died or something. I like how he has a headache at the beginning, cause it makes it clear (now) that he was the one partying... And to be gay and have a homophobic split... just wow! Thanks TJ! I'm so glad you liked it... and yes.. painful headaches.. and i bet Eric's ears were painful too when Paul decided to get his pierced! Link to comment
Bumblebee Posted March 29, 2011 Share Posted March 29, 2011 WOW!!! Amazing story!!! you should be a writer full time Link to comment
Frostina Posted March 29, 2011 Share Posted March 29, 2011 WOW!!! Amazing story!!! you should be a writer full time Thanks and I'm trying Link to comment
Former Member Posted April 28, 2011 Share Posted April 28, 2011 Hi darlin! Congratulations on first story and also that it was a good one! I loved being able to ask you questions bout it as I read along hehehe! Love from Joey~ Link to comment
myself_i_must_remake Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 Good job, Frosty! The might be another split-personality story somewhere on this site, but I certainly haven't seen it. It's nice to see untrodden territory. 1 Link to comment
Frostina Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 Hi darlin! Congratulations on first story and also that it was a good one! I loved being able to ask you questions bout it as I read along hehehe! Love from Joey~ thanks so much Joey! I'm really glad you liked it! Good job, Frosty! The might be another split-personality story somewhere on this site, but I certainly haven't seen it. It's nice to see untrodden territory. Thanks Billy, And i didn't find the other split personality story until i'd posted mine either! and that's when i went.. lol I'm so happy you liked it! Link to comment
Kev de Cauchery Posted May 25, 2011 Share Posted May 25, 2011 Hey hon. This is a shock, now isn't it? I had to read twice to get the ending. I like the story, because it tugs at my heart. Sure sign to me of good writing. Great character building too. But, - remember this comes from love - as for the surprise ending, I wish there were just some more hints/foreshadowing. Maybe there are some, , but I haven't notice them. Also, as we have talked about, the nature of short story is that you don't tie up all the loose ends. Well, I wish I could know more about Eric and Paul, e.g. Why the persona Paul was created? However, despite all that, I still love the story, so... Good writing good read! Link to comment
Frostina Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 Hey hon. This is a shock, now isn't it? I had to read twice to get the ending. I like the story, because it tugs at my heart. Sure sign to me of good writing. Great character building too. But, - remember this comes from love - as for the surprise ending, I wish there were just some more hints/foreshadowing. Maybe there are some, , but I haven't notice them. Also, as we have talked about, the nature of short story is that you don't tie up all the loose ends. Well, I wish I could know more about Eric and Paul, e.g. Why the persona Paul was created? However, despite all that, I still love the story, so... Good writing good read! If i could end the story is a shock rather than a surprise, i did my part well, methinks! I am really really glad i could tug at your heartstrings.. because THAT honestly what every writer tries to do isn't it? As for tying loose ends, yep! its exactly as we'd talked about! so.. Thanks again for all the nice words! I'm so happy that you liked it! Link to comment
AnimalMorph Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 I don't know Eric and Paul was the same person!!!!!! How could i NOT notice? How is that even POSSIBLE? As for the story itself.. It is good. Uhm, okay VERY good. It has a liiiiittle bit piece of reality when us, gay boy, deal with hater like Paul. Can't say i hate Paul, but he is real enough that it makes me shiver. I do wish that you tell us when Paul and Eric are still 'tight', before Paul become such a hater i mean. Maybe when they were kids? Oh well.... All in all, congratulation's Frosty on your very first story. Its good. Link to comment
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