[Skylights] LSL Chapter 9

[Skylights]

https://www.gayauthors.org/story/Skylights/lovingsamlynch/9

 

discuss or whatever

[Caedus]

If it turns out that they aren't meant to be together that wouldn't be the end of the world for me as reader. It just seems to be a big shift in the story since I initially had these assumptions of Sam being the blind straight guy not in touch with his true feelings, and Max being the masochistic gay guy pining over the straight guy that seemingly will never love him back. Is this a part of the shift in how you wanted to write this story?

Edited July 3, 2011 by Caedus

[Skylights]

When I got back into writing this story in the winter, I had fallen in love, and it was different from the first time. The earth literally shifted. My views changed. And so I did mention that the story changed and I wasn't ready to rewrite the first half.

 

Nonetheless, when the story is done, i shall reveal how the story ended the first time I wrote it (before it got deleted).

 

The massive shift in style of writing is yes intended, and Sam's character seems confusing yes, but not entirely different from how I portrayed him before as the clueless lover. He's just different in how I paint him now. When I wrote this, I was just being real. It became less the classical story and it became something of my own all of a sudden.

 

And now...

 

well after having experienced heartbreak that was unimaginable, i don't know where my writing will take me next, but i'm sure you all will enjoy it

[Ramon]

I had the same assumptions as Caedus and I'm really interested to see how where this go because of your change in perspective. The explanation for all the punching, in particular, should be interesting.

[Skylights]

I dont know when I can get the next one out.

 

I'm really emotionally distressed at the moment. bear with me.