Caedus

"Fuck picket fences, I thought as I fell asleep. A picket fence can’t keep me warm at night." Had a good laugh at this. It's hard to balance that contradiction of accepting everyone, but then actually having to accept what that means in reality. Even though the Cadet comes off as a douche, he's still an interesting character to see Corbin try to deal with. People are all their contradictions, which definitely applies to Corbin. As he hazards through his relationship with Pete, it'll be interesting to see how those contradictions play out.

Is it bad that I want you to have Cam "experimenting" with Max and/or Sam in future chapters?

Your so good at eliciting such strong feelings from your readers, earlier reviews are a good example of that. I feel...conflicted. On one hand I kinda feel bad that everything seems to be going wrong and Cooper' now finds out his fantasy of life with Cooper was an illusion. On the other hand.. As much as I tried not to, I loath Cooper and Chase, but I dislike Cooper because I don't respect his choices her at all. So there was a little bit (read-BIG) sense of satisfaction when he found those divorce papers. I I did feel bad when he got punched, he should of beat the &^%! out of Chase imo. Like others have said, it all seemed so good to be true so I'm pretty satisfied with this, though I did not see a marriage coming, though perhaps if Chase is such a star, the marriage may have been public knowledge. Anyways, I loved this chapter, the ending is the sweetest part. Your writing style is good because in your own way, through humor and wit, anger, bitterness, the whole spectrum, you reel us in to have fun with our emotions. Keep it up! I'm not sure where this is going and that's great! I don't care who Cooper ends up with, but I'm definitely gonna enjoy the ride as we figure that out.

I love how ya'll are assuming that Eric is squeaky clean being so close to Tori...Logan definitely left himself vulnerable, especially if Tori calls it by showing Eric the photos. Anyways, good chapter! I enjoy how you put so much with and sarcasm in to your MCs, but I'm even more excited for the dark humor vibe I'm getting off this story. So far you don't seem to use that many of the usual trope in HS fiction, so I can't wait to read what else you have for us. You seem so....flexible with the genres you explore with you explore so keep it up!

Maybe because it's been awhile, or perhaps you've just conveyed the conflicting feelings of Sam and Max's royally messed up head really well, perhaps so well that I'm a little confused about where these two stand with each other. I always thought the issue was Sam being ignorant of what type of relationship he "really" had with Max because he never shifted his model beyond societal norms. Now I'm not sure what to think. Max's feelings always seemed unhealthy to me, but now ..maybe I need to re-read the rest of the story. Anyways, an overall good chapter, gives me a lot to think about. Maybe their both wrong? P.S. More Cam as a catalyst for Sam and Max.

I thought you were going to give us a look at The List from Spencer's perspective, but I like this story so far. It makes some of the mundane and and depressing things associated with being middle aged and makes it entertaining and funny...and still a bit depressing. Cooper's situation isn't all that unexpected, but he's always been a fun POV, so I'm excited to see what you have in story for us as his world starts to slowly unravel.

Just when you think you understand these guys they pull stuff like this! I give up trying to analyze these, especially when going with the flow is so much easier and you get more out of it. Almost like when you finally start listening to the lyrics of a song. Good chapter, does Travis really understand what happened?

Well done. I remember reading a similar story to this on another site, and I got the same initial feeling of shock before everything started to come together. Travis and Tyler deserve each other. I guess the closest word to describe what they are is "love", the full of these emotions we may only begin to witness as readers at this point. I've really enjoyed reading this so far, I can't help but remember the old country songs I grew up listening to in Texas growing up.

About time he figured it out. It sucks right now, but this means Will's relationship won't be quite as asymmetrical as it used to be. Does this realization mean that Will isn't as mature as he thought he was if he really believed he found a life partner at 14 to a perpetually horny pre-teen? Or is he maturity in his advanced outlook at life for his age, and hes beginning to realize the difference between himself and other people his age, which is something that can isolate someone like Will?

Andy, I didn't even consider a gay bashing, duh. Anywho, good chapter, it's so easy to get sucked into the scene playing out in this chapter. I'm surprised that Jordan's Frat brothers would help him, I thought he was a peon to them? Peters out for awhile but that means we get to see Darryl and Wendy fleshed out a bit as characters. Which, despite the grim circumstances, I'm still anticipating what your planning next. Jason's going through quite a dark trial and his friends are going to be a big part in what to end up as a person at the end, regardless of what happens with Peter. I'll save speculation about Peter for later, I'm curious about how gritty and real you want to make the conclusion.

Good Chapter. I always sort of figured there was always a small chance Peter would get into a motorcycle accident, which can be really brutal. I have no idea where your going with this, which I love! Keep it up, its really easy to get into this story.

Andy, As much as I hope Jason won't go to these classes, he's kinda stuck in a corner. I knew it wasn't going to be easy with Royce the way the dinner went with Jason and Peter, but I never thought he would be so concerned about the harmony of his family that he would ask Jason to compromise and do something he really shouldn't be forced to do. In a way it shows us readers how little Royce seems to understand about Jason's sexuality after all these months, or perhaps he's someone who views the happiness of the collective (i.e. family) over an individuals wishes. Whatever the case may be using Jason's guilt as a form of emotional blackmail, while clever, is pretty effed up, imo. You did a good job conveying the emotions Jason's experiencing in the current position. I could almost feel my stomach turning over the decision he has to make. I can't imagine how things could get worse, but I'm guessing they could and will so I'm excited for the next chapter!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY ADAM!!

So Brad and Robbie are finally starting to try to get along, Brian got arrested...but Brad still wants to f**k Matt: What do you guys think will happen? I wish I could say that Brad wouldn't do it, even if things are going well with Robbie, but his crush/lust for Matt is so big that he even brought it up when he talked to JP and Stef about whether he still wanted to be with Robbie. It's gotten to the point where f**king Matt is a condition for any potential LTR. Anything can happen in the next 3-4 chapters to spoil things for Robbie and Brad. I'm excited to find out what Mark decided to do with this. I never thought I would read a story where who f***ed who would affect a storyline this much.

Maybe I'm a weirdo, but I only have two pillows. Thats all I need and anymore would wind up on the floor anyways. I always thought a nice, warm comforters and sheets made the bed more than pillows.