JamesSavik Posted October 27, 2012 Posted October 27, 2012 (edited) The Cloud is now completely posted. It started as a writing prompt but quickly grew into a longish short story. I hope you enjoy my spooky little Halloween lark. The Cloud :>> https://www.gayauthors.org/story/jamessavik/thecloud Edited October 27, 2012 by jamessavik
Slytherin Posted October 28, 2012 Posted October 28, 2012 I liked it.. (I'm not gonna eat lasagna for a while now) lol 1
option Posted October 31, 2012 Posted October 31, 2012 really liked the twist at the end its the sort of story that could nicely be turned into a comic or filmed 1
Site Moderator TalonRider Posted October 31, 2012 Site Moderator Posted October 31, 2012 As I told James when I sent the chapter back to him, I wasn't expecting that ending.
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