Broken by James Savik

[Graeme]

Please take the time out to have a read of James's story: Broken

 

What isn't immediately obvious, though it's implied by the prologue, is that this story is autobiographical. It's not made up....

 

[JamesSavik]

Hi readers-

 

I am klutzing my way through posting this story. I wanted to enter several chapters and then publish them one a day.

 

Derp! My plans didn't work out so smooth.

 

OK- I'm going to publish all 5 chapters now and give you one a day for a while.

 

Hope you dig it. Yes- I actually said that. You can take the boy out of the seventies but you can't take the seventies out of the boy.

[JamesSavik]

 

Edited April 21, 2015 by jamessavik

[JamesSavik]

Edited April 21, 2015 by jamessavik

[papyrophile]

I'm guessing that's the original jersey from the Red Team.  Am I right?  (Don't mind me; I'm a sentimental old coot.)

 

I just found Broken last week and I've been checking every day for new chapters.  Yesterday I found the story at the Dude's place, so I guess I'm ahead of schedule now.  Or am I behind?  (I get so confused lately.)

 

Chapters may be short but each one is positively riveting.  Needless to say, I'll be on the lookout.

 

Carl

[papyrophile]

Dig it?  All I can say is..."Groovy!"

 

Hi readers-

 

[snip]

 

Hope you dig it. Yes- I actually said that. You can take the boy out of the seventies but you can't take the seventies out of the boy.

[JamesSavik]

 

Some of the behaviors you've described in Broken were really troubling.

 

The fighting, the drugs, the incident where you put blood on your face... those are behavioral signs of a very disturbed kid.

 

 

OK, I'm saying this in all good humor but...

 

DUH!

[JamesSavik]

 

[JamesSavik]

 

 

 

< Daddy sez Imma fine deputy.