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A clever, witty tale told by a master story-teller. Bravo!
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III. Crossing swords
andy cannon commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in III. Crossing swords
[I'll try not to kiss you] Logan added. Nico read that again. Then again. Uhhh… [kill you] quickly came in after. Oh. [fucking autocorrect]. HATE it when that happens!!! -
I pondered a bit when Marc referred to the 'running group'... could two runners constitute a group? Then I factored in the pacing horse, "Unresolved Sexual Tension" and concluded that three's a group.
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Simmering along nicely. Very slow burn, and those often lead to the more spectacular eruptions.
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Great start! Brings back memories of my time in Munich, but I sincerely hope that this "running as foreplay" doesn't catch on. My knees couldn't keep up with my libido.
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Wonderful world building.
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Really exciting stuff!
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Aha! The list of suspects is growing!
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Parted at the start of a terribly brutal war. What's to come for Cecil and Hudson?
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Another great chapter. Drama and tension a-plenty!
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Great opening chapter! Fast pace and snappy dialog. I look forward to the next chapter.
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The plan to take George down is alarming! So much can go wrong.
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That last line sounds ominous, even coming from a narrator sitting in an abattoir!
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What a great story! I read an article several years ago about the disparity in pay in adult films. Women are paid the most, then at a considerably lower rate are men in gay films. Men in straight films are way behind at the bottom of the scale, practically paid in coupons for studio merch. Mark seems to have hit on the secret to maxxing out the pay packet.
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I worry that the ill-advised tampering with Brett's truck will come back to hurt Noah and Colt.
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I. Loathe at first sight
andy cannon commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in I. Loathe at first sight
And we see, yet again, that going on a quest at the behest of an Olympian is a dangerous trek. Great writing! -
This sounds very promising!
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I think I dated a couple of guys from the Heart Eaters tribe. Learned that lesson! Great start to the story.
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It may be time for George's lug nuts to be twisted loose. And, yes, that may be a euphemism.
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Wonderful story! I had no idea that moon men were so... frisky!
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Uh-oh! This is an unpleasant development,
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I hope they come up with a better plan! Once Brett is driving in the street or on the highway, Colt and Noah have no control over who else is around him, and the wheels coming off the truck with other vehicles around could have catastrophic results for innocent people.
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A refreshing take on late Victorian society. In the rigid milieu, I suspect that Hudson is wondering if Master Cecil is possibly insane!
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Uh-oh, Colt has that look in his eye. Not the frisky business look, he had that earlier, LOL, This is the 'time to pay the piper' look.
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Yeaz! A great chapter to conclude the mission!
