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andy cannon

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  1. Fantastic story! Looking forward to the next two parts to see what develops.
  2. I was worried about the 'dog discrimination' in the warning box. but it wasn't too upsetting. Plus my Jack Russell Terrier assures me that pugs may not really be dogs anyway, so there's that, LOL.
  3. And he is right, surely, in saying that Franco’s days are numbered; it isn’t certain, though, that democracy will follow. Prescient words, especially considering how close the fragile democracy came to being strangled in 1981.
  4. It's a hard chapter to read because watching someone suffer like that is never easy, but I trust you will resolve it all in the end!
  5. Well, these lads certainly seem to be in the mood for some mischief!
  6. How frightening for Ximo to be detained by corrupt police! A great chapter!
  7. Whatever Nico was about to say turned into a noise. A shameful noise! Shameful? or shameless?
  8. andy cannon

    Betting Debts

    Very spicy and romantic!
  9. What did Chase buy at the mall? It was not an engagement ring. Exotic underwear? Sex toys? A dust mop? AAAARGH! Too many choices!
  10. Another great chapter! Lady Ate is a wonderful addition.
  11. Darkmoore had been a bad idea. Very true. I am hopeful that things turn around.
  12. The period-true debate about the religion was very well written! Particularly: "Our love is a sin." followed by: "There is nothing sinful in my feelings for you." The exchange reveals genuine differences between them. Timothy accepts religious doctrine, assumes himself imperfect, struggles with guilt. Oliver rejects the premise entirely, and sees their love as self-evidently good Neither position is caricatured, and the disagreement deepens both characters.
  13. andy cannon

    Chapter Five

    How sad! But we knew that Cole wasn't "The One", so this was just a little heartbreak on Owen's journey.
  14. Great chapter! The more we see of Nico and Logan, the more I like them.
  15. Marc, you cheeky devil! Sandbagging the past few weeks? Love it!
  16. Very brave of our young Timothy to appeal directly to Mr. Fitzgibbon
  17. andy cannon

    Chapter Three

    Owen's overthinking the text convo with Luke is hilarious and on point. His instinct to break off the communication was valid though. Luke is not for him, and is a creepy wolf with a sheep profile.
  18. No idea what Nathan knows, but I am confident that all will be revealed!
  19. Memorable evocation of the social mores!
  20. Doña Margarita seems to be a formidable woman... it remains to be seen if she will be an obstacle to Ximo and Gerardo!
  21. When all this sexual tension finally breaks, it's gonna be spectacular!
  22. I am quite miffed that I was unaware of the off-the-menu breakfast options for a Bayerisches Frühstück when I was in Munich. That shall be addressed on my next trip.
  23. andy cannon

    Chapter Two

    Really beautiful writing.
  24. andy cannon

    Social Eclipse

    Such an intriguing story!
  25. andy cannon

    Chapter One

    Not so much 'living' as 'existing'. The family might as well say, 'We only keep you around to harvest your organs in case one of the children we really love need them.'
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