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Chapter 6: Breaking point
andy cannon commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: Breaking point
Every chapter sinks deeper in the most unimaginable cruelty. I'm right at the point where I find so little pleasure in reading the story that there is no return on the investment of time. Even poor Julian acted quite reprehensibly in this chapter. -
The sleeper who was awakened
andy cannon commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in The sleeper who was awakened
This caught my eye: 'Both nice, actually,’ Malte said. ‘Such a gay ballet would not be possible in Sweden.’ In the US at the time, Sweden had a progressive, liberated reputation, especially around sexual mores. A lot of adult films circulating at the time originated in Sweden. I was not aware that society was still repressed with regard to LGBTQ issues. -
Frosted Hearts: The Overlook
andy cannon commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Overlook
I hope we see more of Ethan in future chapters! -
Great opening chapter. I look forward to more. Poor Morgan! Worried about being noticed but living in the city with the most CCTV in the world!
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Treizième partie : Les Entremets
andy cannon commented on W_L's story chapter in Treizième partie : Les Entremets
Sad passages and joyous ones... much like life. I was listening earlier to a conservative debating US immigration policy. His argument was that there should be NO immigrants admitted to the US. Instead there should be incentives to increase the birth rate to help the economy grow. This story shows the human face of immigration and the inhumane approach the government is taking now. -
Beautiful verses.
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Very cinematic chapter!
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A man after my own heart! “Not sure about Uncle Vernon. He certainly had a good eye. We used to go around country houses.” “Yes! I remember. Didn’t he like looking at paintings of naked blokes?”
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LOL! Of course he's not... he has a gun from the future and a very thirsty Jack the Wonder Horse.
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Setback after setback... I am not looking forward to the next chapter!
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I am glad this is continuing. It did not feel 'complete' in spite of the change in status.
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A sweet story about young love with a couple of favorite characters.
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They certainly found that the lack of a common language is no impediment to sexy times. A most welcome development!
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I have never been to Medellín, but the food sounds unappealing with the exception of the steakhouse. I have been to Cartagena, and I thought almost every meal I ate there was good. Maybe the advantage of being on the coast? I even liked the arepas there. Miguel is a complex character, and I don't quite trust him yet. He can turn out to be Hunter's great passion or the catalyst for catastrophe, Maybe both? What I need is to have Max in one-on-one scenes with Zach, Yeilson and Miguel. He'll sort them all out and let Hunter know who to trust and who to kick to the curb. 😁😁😁#whosagoodboy
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Great choices for a soundtrack!
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Will knows long-distance was never supposed to be this hard. When Travis leaves Boston for Los Angeles to star in Palisades, their once-manageable separation becomes a cross-country gulf neither of them feels ready for. Will promises loyalty—even with flirtations and forbidden temptations close to home—but Travis’s rising anxiety tests the trust they’ve built. As jealousy, miscommunication, and fame threaten to wedge them apart, the two cling to the rituals that kept them connected: late-night calls, messy humor, and the certainty that love can survive geography. But with new pressures mounting, Will must decide how far he’ll go to keep them from unraveling.
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A spectacular set piece. That is very well written. Mr. Black and Mr. White are so unsettling. I fully expect eventually they are revealed to be androids sent from the future. 😁
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This is just heartbreaking! "I am not a Paladin," Will hissed. "I am a butcher." He opened his eyes. The drawing stared back. The stick figure Dad looked heroic. He looked good. "That is a lie," Will told the crayon figure. "That man doesn't exist anymore. I killed him so you could sleep at night."
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“He’s not ahead of us anymore.” A single, small rock clattered down from the darkness above, its echoes bouncing between the stone walls like mocking laughter. “He’s above us.” OOPS!
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Chapter 7: Junior Year Is Over?!
andy cannon commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 7: Junior Year Is Over?!
That is in the running for the 'least-drama-when-confronted-by-the-parents-the-morning-after-sex' I have ever seen. Way chill. -
The Choices, and Returning Home
andy cannon commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Choices, and Returning Home
Beautiful chapter dealing with some tough issues! -
The Wilderness of the Subconscious
andy cannon commented on ValentineDavis21's story chapter in The Wilderness of the Subconscious
After a series of alarming dreamscapes, it is good to see Crowe reunited with Barghast, who's happy to have him back! -
This so much fun! The characters are all very vivid,
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With El Coyote on the case, Andrew will no doubt be back in safe hands soon!
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Douzième partie: Le Buffet Froid
andy cannon commented on W_L's story chapter in Douzième partie: Le Buffet Froid
Great chapter! A fantastic wedding. I'm bummed that at no ceremony in my life did anyone care enough to create a nude sugar sculpture of me!
