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  1. Toast

    Chapter 2: Haze

    I really liked this chapter. It follows a kind of working day. We meet Jill and Haze and Nats and Carlos and the happy tourists. It is all so typical and yet full of unexpected romance. Haze. I enjoyed reading this and I like your easy writing style and your quirkiness. A lawyer who leaves all to be a diver at a remote resort.
  2. I hope there really is a Kulibari Bay, I loved all the place details. Kate is a great character. I wonder about Blake, a stranger in a strange new town, and he is strange isn't he or does he just think he is? Very different. I liked your first chapter.
  3. Congratulations to All!
  4. A Very Happy and Joyous Birthday! Dear Mattie! ♥♥♥
  5. Toast

    Poem, 3.3.11

    3.3.11 It doesn’t change anything I am still right here Even if I left tomorrow I would end up here today It is not so bad most would say It doesn’t matter after all Don’t let it get to you This is not romantic This is satanic Well I exasperate I exaggerate I exacerbate Excoriate - denounce Excruciate - torment Execrate - detest Bitter or sul
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    Draps de Satin

    Fantasy prayer, plea for more of your love. Craving.
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    Reviens a la Maison

    Carnal and very romantic. Sensual needs are the foundation for all the rest.
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    Je Rêve du Jour

    This has geniuneness, the need is honest, frank, private.
  9. Happy Birthday! Chris!
  10. Toast

    Chapter 1

    I enjoyed this. Questions sometimes have answers and questions sometimes only lead to questions.
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    Chapter 4

    Thank you Nephylim.
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    3.1.11

    Four Poems 3.1.11 3.3.11 3.5.11 3.7.11 republished 10.13.13
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    Poem 3.1.11

    3.1.11 What Well, it is a long list now Of things never to be said I can’t ever say them to myself Used Comment How to be honest With emotion How to be foolish With reason It’s untied Futility Frivolity Why the fool dances so In tatters of wisdom Coruscant corundums See that tree How old it must be It must fall one day
  14. Wonderful to see you Tiger.
  15. I'm hoping he is back soon. ♥
  16. My condolences, NightOwl.
  17. The Spring Anthology - People are Strange - 2011
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    Poem: The Bed

    The Bed By bugeye     This goes round……………………..………… It spins a sound………………………………............. idle I have hard feelings……………………….... Feelings hard to have…………………..…………...... idée fixe Love so hard it cuts me…………………........ So love guts me…………................................. idée reçue I am weak from them………………….……........ These ideas I speak of him Strong I should be…………………………...
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    Labels...?

    My label is Bugeye, make of it what you will.
  20. A poem is always a good please to begin. Whether you are confused or not. I liked this one.
  21. This would have to be a Five Year Calendar because there are easily 60 cuties or more on GA. Perhaps we should have a Cutie of the Day Calendar. We could find 365 cuties here.
  22. Happy Birthday! Bandage!
  23. Happy Birthday! Curti! ♥
  24. Not only do I love this story, but two of my dear friends like it too. That proves what a great read this is.
  25. Thanks for sharing your experience and especially for doing it in verse. Are you going to add a poem to the Spring Poetry Anthology? Hope you do.
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