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  1. Bravissimo!!!!
  2. I’m so sorry to hear about your fall and your surgery! I was honestly worried that something had happened to you because of the long delay. I’m glad you’re finally on the mend and feeling better. Prayers for a speedy recovery! Love your writing! Can’t wait to read how you finish both stories.
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    "Rowan's Dawn"

    Beautiful story! I love your writing. The story evoked a lot in me. When I was younger I had a girlfriend I dated throughout college. When we graduated I moved in with her family and I fell in love with her younger brother. We never did anything. But we flirted a lot. We called it “joking around.” But my girlfriend could tell I was different and that I was falling for him. When she was drunk one night she called me out on it. She broke up with me a couple of weeks later. He was about to go off to college and I had to move back home, so nothing ever came of it. So I could really resonate with Elias’s struggle to keep his distance from Rowan and with Camille’s heartbreak at losing the man she loved to her son. Life can get very messy at times! I never told her brother how I felt about him. At the time, I figured it could never work. It would be too damn awkward for everyone. It’s been 26 years. I know he’s still single. He’s dated a few women and even been engaged but never married. Would it be insane to reach out after all these years???
  4. Dude, where the heck is the next chapter??? It’s been over a month! You can’t leave us on a cliff hanger like this! I’ve been checking in everyday to find out if Five is ok and to see how my Percy baby princess saves the day! Please, for the love of god, give us more!
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    Chapter 21

    Wow! I think I love this story even more than your other series. You have an amazing gift. Your characters are extremely well written and you do a great job creating complex worlds. And the stories are filled with humor and genuinely beautiful moments. I really hope you can come back to this story someday. I’d love to read where Connor and Dakota go from here.
  6. This is my first time posting on your work. I have read the entire series over the course of the past week. I normally don’t go for the paranormal stories, but I have greatly enjoyed reading your stories. You do an excellent job of building the world, developing the characters and keeping a great pace of action in the stories across all of your books. My only critique is that what initially drew me in was the love story between Greg and Scott. Sadly, in my opinion, Scott has largely become a background character over the course of the books. For example, Greg’s new role has dominated the story as it took halfway through book 5 for Greg and Scott to finally consummate their mating bond. Several other characters have considerably more dialogue and more significant storylines than Scott has at this point. Please don’t get me wrong, I’m loving what you have written (obviously since I’ve read all 5 books in less than a week) but I hope you can get back to developing their relationship more before it gets lost to the Tetrarch they’ve now formed. I will say it was nice to read your April Fools chapter to see that Greg still cares so much for Scott and would be lost without him. I don’t know that comes through as much in the main story as Billy has taken on an outsized role and Greg’s “sons” and Barony issues get most of Greg’s attention now. Again, overall, loving the books! I’d just like more character development around Scott and his relationship with Greg. Thanks!
  7. Please god yes! I can’t wait any longer!!
  8. Thank you! This story wrecked me in all the right ways! I don’t think I’ve cried this much in a long time. And I needed the tears.
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    Epilogue

    Thank you for a wonderful story. I laughed and cried throughout. I am in my 40’s and just recently came out to some of my family and friends. Thankfully, I’ve only had positive reactions so far. But I was terrified of rejection, especially from family. So I can resonate with Noah’s character. I thought you wrote him very well and it was a good, honest, portrayal of what a lot of us go through trying to accept who we are and the inner turmoil we face as we come out to family and friends. Like Noah, I’m glad I finally came out! I’m much happier and healthier now that I did. And, hopefully, I’ll find my own Jordan someday.
  10. I feel bad for Alexander. He’s hoping to have a relationship with Lyn. But Lyn is acting out of jealousy and anger. If they have sex now, it will ruin what they have been building. Alexander doesn’t want to be Lyn’s revenge sex. And I think Lyn would ultimately hate himself for treating Alexander that way too. I hope Alexander is smart enough to realize something is still wrong with Lynn and asks more questions before taking him up on his offer. I’m glad Lyn finally sees Brad for who he really is. But he’s still clueless about how Alexander has always felt about him. It’s amazing the Lyn could be a good lawyer and yet so oblivious as to who is friends really are at their core and how they both actually feel about him.
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