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Wow! I think I love this story even more than your other series. You have an amazing gift. Your characters are extremely well written and you do a great job creating complex worlds. And the stories are filled with humor and genuinely beautiful moments. I really hope you can come back to this story someday. I’d love to read where Connor and Dakota go from here.

This is my first time posting on your work. I have read the entire series over the course of the past week. I normally don’t go for the paranormal stories, but I have greatly enjoyed reading your stories. You do an excellent job of building the world, developing the characters and keeping a great pace of action in the stories across all of your books. My only critique is that what initially drew me in was the love story between Greg and Scott. Sadly, in my opinion, Scott has largely become a background character over the course of the books. For example, Greg’s new role has dominated the story as it took halfway through book 5 for Greg and Scott to finally consummate their mating bond. Several other characters have considerably more dialogue and more significant storylines than Scott has at this point. Please don’t get me wrong, I’m loving what you have written (obviously since I’ve read all 5 books in less than a week) but I hope you can get back to developing their relationship more before it gets lost to the Tetrarch they’ve now formed. I will say it was nice to read your April Fools chapter to see that Greg still cares so much for Scott and would be lost without him. I don’t know that comes through as much in the main story as Billy has taken on an outsized role and Greg’s “sons” and Barony issues get most of Greg’s attention now. Again, overall, loving the books! I’d just like more character development around Scott and his relationship with Greg. Thanks!

Please god yes! I can’t wait any longer!!

Thank you! This story wrecked me in all the right ways! I don’t think I’ve cried this much in a long time. And I needed the tears.

Thank you for a wonderful story. I laughed and cried throughout. I am in my 40’s and just recently came out to some of my family and friends. Thankfully, I’ve only had positive reactions so far. But I was terrified of rejection, especially from family. So I can resonate with Noah’s character. I thought you wrote him very well and it was a good, honest, portrayal of what a lot of us go through trying to accept who we are and the inner turmoil we face as we come out to family and friends. Like Noah, I’m glad I finally came out! I’m much happier and healthier now that I did. And, hopefully, I’ll find my own Jordan someday.

I feel bad for Alexander. He’s hoping to have a relationship with Lyn. But Lyn is acting out of jealousy and anger. If they have sex now, it will ruin what they have been building. Alexander doesn’t want to be Lyn’s revenge sex. And I think Lyn would ultimately hate himself for treating Alexander that way too. I hope Alexander is smart enough to realize something is still wrong with Lynn and asks more questions before taking him up on his offer. I’m glad Lyn finally sees Brad for who he really is. But he’s still clueless about how Alexander has always felt about him. It’s amazing the Lyn could be a good lawyer and yet so oblivious as to who is friends really are at their core and how they both actually feel about him.