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Chapter 13: Meeting with The Snake
Elezbed commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 13: Meeting with The Snake
Oh goodies, they now have their black jaguar kitling ! Your story and yours characters are good! I will be waiting for the next chapter! -
Outch I understand! Perhaps someone who is near London have some chair for picnic than we can have...
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Don't worry it's going to rain (it's London after all) and we will need to do the plan B ... (we still don't know what it is!) For the photographs, I think that we will be careful and not post them anywhere...
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Chapter 14 - Scott's View
Elezbed commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Scott's View
Cute reallu cute story! And it is fun to see it from the other side lol! Charlie just blushed! Don't stop here ! Write more! -
I would like to send to you my email adresse but it seems that you can't receive new message...! Did everyone send theirs email at the same time?
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Ok it's beginning to be really complicated lol! Karadur is coming at the rescue ! Well, I can only hope it will not be too late for the other... This story needs a happy ending *hint hint nudge nudge wink wink*! Write more!
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A pique nique could be fun ! And I like japanese food but I know it's difficult for some ... And for the people who will be Monday (and Sunday) there is the Carnaval at Notting Hill...
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Poor Nephy! I hope you find a job soon... Yes, you're coming ! And MANDAAAAAAAAAAAA!, and Bleu and Agaith and.... It's going to be so ! The reservation for a restaurant is good! But is there something that one of us doesn't really like or is allergic too? (Suppose we book in a restaurant with only fish and someone can't eat it or something like that...)! Bises
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Well, I KNEW! just when he began to speak with Paul! Poor Jordy must be difficult for him! I was so wonderng at the beginning where Paul came from but everything was explain... Good story! At last this one is not a cliffie and it's original! Kiss
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FROSTYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!! COME BACK HERE AND WROTE the sequel! You can't stop here! Think about your poor characters, staying in danger... your are cruel! You needs to help them, really! Apart from that, your story is a little difficult to read because everything is too speedy! but the clifhanger make us forget it. So it's a good story but it will be better with....A SEQUELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL! Kisses
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Chapter 13 - Getting Through the Day
Elezbed commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Getting Through the Day
Oh oh It's going to be interesting! Poor Julie lol! Write more! But the two Rick are too confusing! I spend some time thinking that they were the same (at the beginning when you show the first one and the other hug Charlie...). Love the Mum, she is a Momma bear ! -
Chapter 18: A Prince’s Anger
Elezbed commented on Dark's story chapter in Chapter 18: A Prince’s Anger
Well, they are all in hell... Don't leave them here! Write more! -
Oh I am the first to review! Well SEXXXXXXXXXX XD! hum I like this chapter because: everything is well and them BAM you just had to ask the question lol! how did the plague came! So somebody is perhaps trying to kill jaguar clan with a plague? or just a coincidence? WRITE MORE!
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I found an hotel so everything is fine!!! Don't worry Mark we will take lot of pictures ! SO SEE YOU SOONNNNNNNNN!
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The train fare is booked! I will be there Saturday morning! I need to find an hotel now...
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Everybody is ALIVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! all but the bad guys! I love a good happy ending! Write more!
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I would like to attend too if I am sure to have the money this summer...
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Yes a new chapter! And everything is fine in this one XD! Write more!
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Chapter 7: Striking A Deal
Elezbed commented on Linxe Termoil's story chapter in Chapter 7: Striking A Deal
Love this chapter like the story... It's the one I prefer! What was Patrick saying to his father? Is it welsh? Write more!!!! -
a chapteof transition i think.... I can't wait to see what will happen next ^^ Write more!
