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NOOOOOOO! Why did you stop here??? Who is at the door? I want to know what happen next!!!! I like it! The poor snake needs some love Write more!
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ohhhh a new Carthera story!!! And it's a snake story!!! It's going to be fun ! I have a stupid question! Do he have poison to go with the fangs? It's look like this story is going to be fun! Write more!
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Chapter 24 - Heart Matters
Elezbed commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 24 - Heart Matters
Well, waiting to see if Barbara is going to be alright after the surgery... I love when Charlie is in charge Who is Cameron? A ex-lover of Scott? -
Poor Glory, he can't have a break Well, I hope he will be well after but it's going to be difficult again for him... Write more
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Chapter 14: Hurricane Micah
Elezbed commented on Linxe Termoil's story chapter in Chapter 14: Hurricane Micah
YOU MAKE ME CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate you I love this chapter because of Micah and Joel! Well all is fine at the end of this chapter (oh we don't have a cliffhanger for once ) And I can't wait to see what you are going to do with your poor characters ... Write more -
lol Michael and Lucifer together... cute
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Chapter 35: Dawn in the World of Night
Elezbed commented on Dark's story chapter in Chapter 35: Dawn in the World of Night
RHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! The cliffhanger is too much!!! I want to read what happen next! <OO> puppy eyes of doom -
Part One: The Book of Genesis III
Elezbed commented on Johnathan Colourfield's story chapter in Part One: The Book of Genesis III
Wow, it seems to be an epic story... I don't understand everything, who is who for example (the guy in the prologue for example) but I suppose it will be explain later... It seems original..;Write more! -
Chapter 23 - The Morning After
Elezbed commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 23 - The Morning After
The beginning was cute but the end is bad Poor Barbara! You are an evil evil man And I love when Charlie got to be the boss Write more -
Poor Glory, each time he is hurt he needs a hug Glory It seems that they can't be kept in the same room... I wonder what you are going to do... And it is strange that Sar doesn't know that the back of the fay is sensitive when he had another fay at home... Write more
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Give a hug to Luke for me !!! The best family you can have is not always your blood family... Pss I saw your picture and you are cute (and not ugly) ! I would have loved to kick Chris in the balls! And Stu agreed with me !
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Chapter 13: The Calm before the storm
Elezbed commented on Linxe Termoil's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Calm before the storm
Wow this is a big chapter with many informations... And you finish by a cliffhanger!!! Bad Linxe Well since you feed me spoiler, is the dad the one who provoqued what happen in the spoiler? (I don't want to spoil for the reviewers...) I can't wait to see what happen next! I suppose Patrick will be Micah's knight in shiny armor Write more! -
I got this email from Jian and we (I and Mark) wanted everyone to be reassured about Jian... If you send him a email, he will be happy about it.... So go ahead!
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Wow, it was epic! It's difficult to understand what is happening when, especially when you separated the characters (like what is happening with Karadur or Kynan during this chapter)... But I want to see how everything ends so ...WRITE more
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lol drunk Micah is fun XD! But the hangover is going to be hell
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Wow, this chapter is great!!! I just have a stupid question: how a music teacher (like Elizabeth) doesn't know that left-handed guitare exists?
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Chapter 10: Mana Dual, Part I
Elezbed commented on jamiiewhiite's story chapter in Chapter 10: Mana Dual, Part I
cool beginning of the battle XD! I like this part ! Write more! -
Chapter 33: Where did Everybody Go?
Elezbed commented on Dark's story chapter in Chapter 33: Where did Everybody Go?
wow, the angst in this chapter is huge! Since the Queen's hunters got Azil, he is going to be ok, right? and poor Alan Write more! -
YOUPI!!! A new chapter!!! Well, it's look like eveything is fine at the end of the chapter but it's going to be difficult with Timmy lol! I want to know why Patrick lied to the judge !!! Meanie ! Micah is so obvious lol ! Write more!!!
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Wow it's becoming more and more complicated ! So who were the two lifes dying in the chapter 31? Write more!
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They are soooooooooo cute XD Well, nothing really happen in this chapter but the end is teasing us Charlie is taking charge!!! GO GHARLIE GO! Write more !
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Chapter 31: Arawn Means Death
Elezbed commented on Dark's story chapter in Chapter 31: Arawn Means Death
Wow It is the cliffhanger to end all cliffhangers ! i suppose that the two lives ending where Karadur and his mate BUT you could still surprise us (hint hint ) WRITE MORE !!!! -
Chapter 21 - And a Time to Give Thanks
Elezbed commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 21 - And a Time to Give Thanks
Wow a big family XD! Rich Senior couldn't help himself lol! I hope he is going to stop being like this and be here more for his son... Good chapter as always XD! I love Scott in this chapter Write more
