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  1. Elezbed
    RAHHHHHHHHHHH not the cliffhangerrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!! grrrrrrrr I want to know what is the doom!!! Is it the prince? What is happening???? Apart from that, It's a good chapter ! The sex and not in a dream XD! WRITE MORE !!!!
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    Wow the war is coming! And now I understand who is Karadur I like this chapter XD! I will be waiting to see what happen next!
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    Well, this chapter is sweet! Even if nothing really happen... What is the relation with Glenn? Write more !
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    I really like this story XD! I prefer this sort of vampire to twilight I will be looking at your others fics...
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    Alan is the best ! And the sex was hot ! Now everything seems fine...I will be waiting for the next disaster Write more!
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    Oh oh the plot is thickening! I wonder what is going to happen next! I think this chapter is less 'cliche' than the others (less Final Fantast )! Well I prefer this one! But Evergreen? Perhaps it will be better if you give it a name more 'elfique' ? Write more!
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    Scott vs the Wagner family... It's going to be fun!
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    Stetson Boy

    Elezbed commented on Johnathan Colourfield's story chapter in Stetson Boy

    The Stetson is the ghost of a cowboy (for the Stetson) who use now a bike and not a horse to be more modern and who only want to have sex lol!
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    Everything is fine now ! Good! I like this chapter ... Write more
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    poor Kynan, I just want to hug him... He really need help...the sex is hot Write more!
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    Well, I am HAPPY! You wrote again!!!! Well Ken is STUPID! He should have speak with Micah before !!! Padrig is here again! cool! I wonder if he thought that he went to bed with Micah and if something happen hahaha! Write more!
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    My first reaction : pyu? meaning what the hell is going on... Oh the sex talk for incubus lol! I can't wait XD! Poor Bryce he is going to be a single mum lol! I can said that i was not waiting for Delaure... Write more!
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    Chapter 1

    Elezbed commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Cute story! Even if Alex is really really slow...
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    Chapter 25: Incubus

    Elezbed commented on Dark's story chapter in Chapter 25: Incubus

    I have a question! 'And our son's -- your grandson's -- pairling' from Azil means that Kynan is the son or the grandson of Karadur? Karadur is the dad of the queen? And Kynan is half incubus, I understand why nobody knew who his father is... Duncan doesn't have a chance again Jacen lol! I really like this chapter because you explain things! Write more!
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    Well, I must say that it is a little like Final Fantasy ...But I like it! So what is goign to happen next? Where did the 'Nirvana' come from?
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    Cool! i can't wait to see everybody !
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    hum... I don't think I understand what is happening in your fic...The bad guys at the beginning are trying to do what? destroy the world? And the falling star is like Ark-Angel? And why is he waiting for Fayh? What is the summoning? EXPLAIN! Well apart from that, you can see that I want to know what happen next sooooo WRITE ! Good beginning!
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    Epilogue

    Elezbed commented on Dark's story chapter in Epilogue

    Well, the end is bittersweet... I like this story even if the ending is not happy all the way... But it's a very good story!
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    I like this story! And I love the son ! Wrote more story like this one!
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    Well, we all know that the quiets ones are the one to watch lol! When Charlie take controls, everybody follow ! Good work with this chapter and I can't wait to see what happen at lunch!
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    WOW! Everyone is safe now! or perhaps not (poor Alan)! And Kynan got wings! I love wings! So apart from that, I can only say: good job! Write more!
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    Chapter 14: Meetings

    Elezbed commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 14: Meetings

    wow! They are so cute! And I can't wait to see who is responsable for the problem in the jungle! Write more in this universe! It's really a fun one lol!
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    OHHHHHHHHHH! Charlie began to understand! He is really slow! AND THEY KISSED! And everything is crashing lol! At last Ricky didn't hurt Ricky Jr... So WRITE MORE! Kiss and Hug
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    Wow! So many things happening... Charlie is thinking about Scott, Ted just lost the love of his life (or his job or something XD), Rick the second (lol) just got hurt and the mum is here! It's going to explose lol! Write more! Kiss and Hug PS we need longer chapters! sneak attack lol
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    Coolllllllllllllllllll! We learn so many things here! AND the werewolf and the halfdemon are save (or they will be)! WRITE MORE!
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