Manu
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And that's what my dad did. So...you know, in that respect, way to go, Dad!... WTF? is this kid stupid or what? there's a difference between going looking for just a dick to fuck and cheating your espouse... what an ass
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Hope Brandon finds out and dumped that shit for good
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OH I hate Billy, he's a coward DX seriously! Just tell Bobby you're screwing Brandon now, and I think you'll someday cheat on him! Dunno why but I think he will...
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"Not bad for a closeted gay virgin boy" If I remember correctly you just had a dick up in your ass... you're not a virgin anymore so.. lol
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What an ass Billy is... he's cheating both the boy he say "he loves" and a girl who deserves better... I hate people playing with other people's feelings
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6 feet? Isn't that too tall for a 14 year old? lol, I've liked the story so far..
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I agree you have to make a sequel I loved Ariel I truely did
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I liked it so far, just one thing, the words you used in spanish are more common used in countries from LatinAmerica, not from Spanish from Spain.
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Noooo why did you leave the sex out DX Wanted to read that!!!!
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what a lovely thing :') so romantic so cute, you wrote exactly my idea of how a date should be
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You need to edit better the chapters there are words missing... On the other hand I'm loving this story
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You need to be a little more descriptive about places and situations, and also make the story flow more naturally cause sometimes you jump from one situation to another too quickly. I want to know how Christopher and Johnathon look, I don't knowi if I missed their description. But I'm really enjoying the story :B good story!
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So what year is this supposed to happen? I found it odd a rich boy doesn't have an Ipod lol and uses a walkman unless this is set in the 90's
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I wonder if they'll be able to have sex that would be interesting and hot
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shouldn't gibby be kinda sad? He took the news TOO well
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argh! I wanna hit Ethan in the face sooo hard ¬¬
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Argh!! I'm hating this chapter dunno why... Ethan thinks too damn much DX It's making me crazy... Good story though
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Wait a minute is he already dead? DX nooooooooo please tell me he's in a coma
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Chapter 12: Second Song, Jumping Ship
Manu commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 12: Second Song, Jumping Ship
moooreeee please! -
Probably I missed it bit how does he looks? I mean the face? I'm liking it
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need more of this soon
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LOVED IT
