jian_sierra
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Hey Breeze. Thank you very much for reading and writing a review. I can't promise when, but give me time and I'll write the sequel. Till then, cheers!
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Hey comicfan, thanks for reading and writing a second review Oh about the farm tools, well, I don't have any excuse. Suffice to say that I don't write about 'them' anymore Thanks again!
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Hey thanks for reading. Anyway, sorry for making you cry (I teary-eyed while writing this too so hope that compensates). Let's see what happens to the two in the coming chapters and hope them all the best.
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Hey eon, thanks for reading and writing a review. You're welcome btw. I find your analysis of the story spot on so very perceptive of you Thanks!
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Oh wow, thanks for reading this. And thank you for your nice words, it brightened up my day
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Frosty, you're welcome I love this story too not because I wrote this, but because it's meaning is something really personal to me. Thanks for reading
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Happy birthday Jwolf
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Ok I didn't even know I had this until now. Thank you so much guys!
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I agree with Maria that it needs some editing, but the 'soul' of the poem and the essence of the theme was there
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It evoked a reaction in me so I would say that it's good. And I like it. Thanks!
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Stu, thanks for reading. Yeah I hate it when I get a migraine argh. Hope you like the next chapter as well
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Hey Bleu, thanks for the review. I hope Grandpa will be able to sort things out.
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Ooh make-up sex is not a bad idea. It's not yet out of the question anyway "They are men" what do you mean by this, hm? Thanks Maria for all the help!
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Why am I not surprised anymore that you're the first one to read this and left a review? Anyway, thanks for crying with me Frosty. I was a mess most of the day while writing
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My surprise dissolved as worry, anger and a slight fear vied for my attention. The mix of emotions drained me, but I managed to clench my jaw. Seeing this, the rage dissipated from Mich’s face and was replaced by shame. I sat still as I studied him while he did the same, our eyes communicating silently. His good eye blinked and, like being awoken from a restless sleep, I clumsily stood up and collected ice from the refrigerator and put them onto a towel. With his eyes closed and his head
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Hm I must confess that you're really good. So since I'm not very good at reviewing poems, let me just say that I really enjoyed reading this one. Thanks!
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Wow I don't even know what review to write. I know it's good (well I feel it is), but I'm too dum--simple minded to grasp the poem's true meaning. But still, I really like it
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I don’t know how my life has changed It just did And I’m none the wiser whether it is good for me Or not But as it is, I am not who I used to be I think The differences between the new and my previous self Unknown But there are times when I remember The past There’s this feeling of something I can’t put my finger on What is it? Like there’s more to me than my idea of myself A shadow? Perhaps it is indeed the shadows of my former selves Coming out
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A poem with a view toward introspection.
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You have a way with words, that's for sure. Though you've used so many words, I'll only use one: great. Thanks for sharing
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Well that was quite a ride. I have no idea what you were talking about on the first part of this poem, but I read on anyway as it is really entertaining (even a bit funny). Then the last line just explained everything I read. Very good
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Very interesting and in a good way. Can't say more, sorry
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This was your first time, eh? You just make it seem so easy, don't you? First with the story writing and now with poems! **sigh** Anyway, I really like this one because I can relate to it in so many ways. Thanks
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If I'm counting it right (hope so), I fourth the 'chatterbox'
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Through dark and cold seasons
jian_sierra commented on Bleu's story chapter in Through dark and cold seasons
Bleu, wow. I feel like I know you a little better after reading this poem. I certainly enjoyed reading this one, thank you for sharing
