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Ok, I'm not arguing. Phil and Clive can't happen because of so many things, but let's keep our fingers crossed, shall we?
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Sorry you didn't like Ethan. There's a reason why he's important in the chapter actually. I guess he didn't do his job well Or more accurately, I didn't do my job well! *shrug* Thanks for leaving a review
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I felt cold sweat trail down my naked back as I used my fingers to spread the charcoal on the paper I worked on. Picking up a charcoal stick, I added curves and lines on my drawing to give a part of it more definition while hiding other parts in shadow through smearing. As I let the need to create something out of nothing take over, I allowed my mind to wander. Not surprisingly, I thought of Phil. Stopping for a while, my eyes wandered to the shirt I unkindly tossed in a corner earlier.
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Happy Birthday!!!
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I knew the 'Promising Author' designation is a two-edged sword. Anyway, I'm glad you like this story. Well I don't usually recommend people to read my stories, but since you said 'more please', I have others posted here so feel free to read. Thanks for taking the time to read and for your kind words
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Oh wow, Happy Birthday!!! Have a good one :hug:
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Happy Birthday!!!
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Just wanna add that you have to have 'Author' status in order to post in GA Stories. In order to do that, go to Store and 'buy' the Author status. Don't worry, it's actually free (the cost is $0). Hope this helps
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Hey thank for you very much for reading (and in one day too). Please bear with me as it takes me time to write
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I'm afraid there won't be any SB until next week. I'm gonna work on another ongoing story for this week (hopefully). But that's off topic already. Thanks for reading and leaving a review. Very much appreciated
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Of course I know why, it's because I always promise to write more, but always fail I'm hoping for smooth sailing for the two of them (but then again, I'm a romantic). Thanks for reading
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Awww I was hoping for bittersweet Anyway, promise to post the chapter as soon as I can. Thanks for reading
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This is my first time to read a poem of yours (sorry, I've just reorganized my daily life so as to put in a little bit of reading) and I must say, I'm very much impressed. There's something about this poem which rings true that's why I was moved. Thanks for sharing!
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Welcome Dan
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Awww you still reviewed! Thank you very much. I'm hoping for something good for Coop and Mich too. Maybe Seb will serve as their good luck charm
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During the few seconds it took for Mich to turn from the door to me, my senses heightened. Funny as it might sound, I thought I tasted in my mouth the bittersweet flavor of the dark chocolate I ate an hour ago. I distinctly heard my heart beating against my chest and the rush of air as it went in and out of my nose. The pinprick feeling of Seb’s claws against my skin as he scratched in his sleep almost made me cry out in pain. And I saw with detailed clarity the hopeful glint in Mich’s eyes toge
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That's really powerful writing. It's a bit worrying, yes. One can even say that it's a little disturbing. But you captured the emotion of the main character really well. Good job
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Hi Patrick48, welcome to GA I'm not American, but I thought it would be nice to say 'hi' to you. Hope you enjoy the site
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Happy Birthday!
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Hey thank you so much for reading. Yeah, my stories tend to be simple or more appropriately, I write very simply. Unfortunately, this story is currently on hold as I have other ongoing stories. Hopefully, I get to to work on this soon. Thanks again!
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I do it the way I want to be criticized. What I want is to be able to write better so I try to be constructive with my criticism of others. I usually start with things I like about the story and then points out things which didn't work for me (if there's any at all). As for editing crit, I try to stay away from them as I'm not really a native English speaker.
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Well here's the weird way i write to make it interesting for me. When I start a story, I usually know the beginning and end of the story line. After that, I make up the rest which is fun. Sometimes I just get these cool ideas (based on my personal standards of course) on what to write and it just gets me really excited to begin writing
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Hi Paradox87, welcome to GA
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Happy Birthday
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I love moments like these. My eyes took on the world as it was blessed by the skies above—rain. Having finished my history assignment, I sat in an armchair in front of a glass-paned window. I didn’t merely sit, I slouched—made myself comfortable while I watched the view outside. So surreal. My room overlooked the school grounds. Raindrops on green grass. It sounded almost poetic, at least to me. Strange though that I didn’t see anyone walking in the rain. My fellow college students had n
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