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agreed intense, i'm hooked, hook line and sinker. i'm new to your writing and I don't know how this is gona pan out. brad seems like a great bro. love the chemistry between the bros and Nate's loyalty towards Brad. onto chapter 2

loving your story. I understand ryder giving in, but am disappointed. its a rough road. how's this gona play out in ryder getting a place at ted's home. seems like he's following in his dad's footsteps. get back to the letter where ryder's dad advises him not to go down that road. learn from your dad's experiences ryder because of what happened, you payed the price of loosing your dad. don't let anyone pay that same price because you're not there. just a thought.

wtf, nate, angel of death, olly, normal teen who wants to be heard and recognised for who he is who loves his bro but is acting like a normal teen who wants to be noticed and yet finds affinity with ryder, ryder, mixed up, loving ted but his past and addiction pulling him back and away from, ted, ted who wants to save the world and yet the person he wants to save seems sometimes doomed to end up 6 feet under, mike, ryder's guardian angel, his parents, loving the boys including ryder yet feel betrayed by ryder's selfsacrefice. where are these characters gona end up. hooked till how ever they end up

maybe ted's parents need to take ted's advise, you can't hold to anger and hurt forever. I get the hurt they experiencing because they thought of ryder as a 2nd son. surely they could cut him some slack bearing in mind he's just lost his granma, the depression. they knew about that when ted and ryder were going out. ted's mom, what has happened to you and his dad over the last 13 years, ryder you rock, olly great stuff coming from you, keep that spirit, ted, you my hero. I'm very invest in the story loved the sceen between olly and ryder. great that we hear about the 2 from olly's perspectives. I wander if what happened over the last 13 years will have a bearing in driving the 2 guys apart. are these the same parents of the last book. they don't communicate with each other, the mother seems more domineering, the dad is a shadow of himself. that is not a criticism, people do change, its just that i'm disappointed with the kind of people have become. this story is full of surprisingly tender moments. i'm listening to the story with some music in the background to suit the mood.

I wander if the patient that ted needs to operate on is anyone we know.

the sceen between olly, ted and ryder is making me tear up. ryder making ted's imperfections perfect, making ted look good in olly's eyes and despite his pain and withdrawals, making olly feel confortable, you can see the love these 2 guys share. what ever happens, weather they make it true or not, i'm in it for the long hall. keep tugguing at them hearstrings, hope there many more chapters

thankyou. I was waiting for this, I know its not going to be easy, lots of bumps I know but i'm still rooting for the guys. keep them comming

great end to the chapter. love ryder's realisation to a point about mike. a whole lot needs to happen before ryder forgives himself and can live with his actions. maybe ted too needs to get help to deal with the hurt and anger issues or it could resurface. as always, you never disappoint, you're an ace at tugging at my heart strings

I don't blame teddy either. there's a whole lot of pain he's going through. anger and hurt is simmering beneath and yet there's still love. teddy's parents, like any, aren't perfect. i'm concerned though about the damage ryder has done to himself and monitoring his heart sounds ominous. i'm rooting for them to come through this and yet even if they forgive each other, the years between, ryder's health, addiction, forgivness from both guys, all of this could play a role in them being parted. moving onto to next chapter

as I completed this chapter I tore up. great writing thans

wow, how much have these guyschanged. can the time away from each other bridge what happened to each of them. my heart goes towards teddy, butt I can see how ryder is hurting wants to make up and hidden guilt. what happens, i'm in the story for the long hall, I hope that the bonds they share at the end will be stronger because all that they've been through. you are my alltime emo mystro, thankyou, onto next chappy

0 absilutely amazing story. I've been up since last night reading this and had to get to work today. Rivitting read

awsome read, Mark and ros are really the ideal couple. Your style of writing has me hooked like a fish. what I'd like to know is what happened to cile, will Mark and ross relationship last bearing in mind that ross is a public figgure and how would Mark ajust to himself becomming public as well. would their relationship withstand the pressures that come with being in a relationship with someone like Ross. There's also the issue of trusting each other. but a very good read and thankyou for that looking forward to more from you. please make your next story a long read as well. thanks for sharing, stay stronng

I spent most of last night with Jacob find his way, compelling, engaging, edge of your seat stuff. My favs are, Jacob, joee, the doctor and jake's grandad. I hope jake and joee are in it for the longrun, they complement eachother. 3 cheers to daddy rick, love his comments and your techniques at the end of the chapter really works. something else that works are the twists and turns in your story and your always keeping us guessing. keep up the posts

I love your commenting after each chapter technique and Daddy Rick, your editor works, would love to know more about him. Love his comments, hoping in some way, eric and Josh, end up together, don't think that Josh and Kriss work, nor the latest love interest, I think that we in for a rocky ride now that Josh's dad is governor, the mercy waters of politics and who is gona remained scared because of that. my favs among your charactors are, Josh, Eric, Brandon, Josh's dad, beth. Shadow just does it for me, I love it, please post after chap39, i'm at 18 right now and I think lots are gona happen.

In which order should i read these. I've started off with shadow of my father and am at chap9. I'm finding it absilutely enthralling

looking forward to it, can't wait, keep going strong mate, post soon please

Hi jacob, i've read 4 chapters of shadow of my father and am enthralled, hope this is gona be a good one as well as hoping it has many chapters, enjoy long reads. your writing style is seriously compelling and keeps one at the edge of ones seat and you get to care for the charateters.

enjoyed the 2 chapters and hoping for a long and rocky ride ahead. there's lots of impitis from the first 2 chapters to make this a long, bumpy, sidesplitting rolercoaster ride. I'm curious how you gona tackle, 1, the parent issue and 2, boss and worker issue and 3, the boss thinking that anything he wants, he gets. Mmm, keep up the pace and the posts, lets have more and make it long as in, many chapters. Is there gona be a sequel to the house always wins, lots of material for a sequel?

I'm gona take some of your suggestions, since I'm a movie peasant. I'm more accustomed to radio dramatizations of movies. so, for what it's worth, madam x, only yesterday, broken arrow, the champ, the elephant man, love story, terms of indeerment, randem harvest. these are anxient movies but Ive discovered it a year ago. Maybe I had my head under a stone all these years but the are the movies for what it's worth. some interesting suggestions comming from you though

alex is just hot, aside from his powers, he's extremely caring. Its gona take some getting used to, alex powers and is their relationship gona withstand these new revelations. part 2 was a shocker and it brought out the rough side of alex. definately need to reveal more of whats going on with alex. mooiskoot broer, ek vind jou veerhaal onveerstaanbaar. You've got your hooks into me, keep it there right till the end. One thing I'm scared of though, your comment about Keegs wishing he were dead by the end. what's that all about. Is alex gona just dissappear, saying that he needs to help somebody else or is Keegs gona be, physically be worse off than he already is. why do i get the impression that the relationship's not gona last. I hope i'm wrong. I'm enthralled

i'm totally blind and what matters for me is their sweetness, kindness, how they treat others, thoughtfullness. there's also the physical aspect like how they smell, being clean, the voice as well is something that i'm atracted to along with the way they touch me. sometimes the immediate atraction is the voice or smell though

I love cuddling, haven't done it in ages all i do is cuddle my pillow, hope I get a cuddle some time though

yes, i'd highly reccomend it as well. really awsome