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agreed intense, i'm hooked, hook line and sinker. i'm new to your writing and I don't know how this is gona pan out. brad seems like a great bro. love the chemistry between the bros and Nate's loyalty towards Brad. onto chapter 2

loving your story. I understand ryder giving in, but am disappointed. its a rough road. how's this gona play out in ryder getting a place at ted's home. seems like he's following in his dad's footsteps. get back to the letter where ryder's dad advises him not to go down that road. learn from your dad's experiences ryder because of what happened, you payed the price of loosing your dad. don't let anyone pay that same price because you're not there. just a thought.

wtf, nate, angel of death, olly, normal teen who wants to be heard and recognised for who he is who loves his bro but is acting like a normal teen who wants to be noticed and yet finds affinity with ryder, ryder, mixed up, loving ted but his past and addiction pulling him back and away from, ted, ted who wants to save the world and yet the person he wants to save seems sometimes doomed to end up 6 feet under, mike, ryder's guardian angel, his parents, loving the boys including ryder yet feel betrayed by ryder's selfsacrefice. where are these characters gona end up. hooked till how ever they end up

maybe ted's parents need to take ted's advise, you can't hold to anger and hurt forever. I get the hurt they experiencing because they thought of ryder as a 2nd son. surely they could cut him some slack bearing in mind he's just lost his granma, the depression. they knew about that when ted and ryder were going out. ted's mom, what has happened to you and his dad over the last 13 years, ryder you rock, olly great stuff coming from you, keep that spirit, ted, you my hero. I'm very invest in the story loved the sceen between olly and ryder. great that we hear about the 2 from olly's perspectives. I wander if what happened over the last 13 years will have a bearing in driving the 2 guys apart. are these the same parents of the last book. they don't communicate with each other, the mother seems more domineering, the dad is a shadow of himself. that is not a criticism, people do change, its just that i'm disappointed with the kind of people have become. this story is full of surprisingly tender moments. i'm listening to the story with some music in the background to suit the mood.

I wander if the patient that ted needs to operate on is anyone we know.

the sceen between olly, ted and ryder is making me tear up. ryder making ted's imperfections perfect, making ted look good in olly's eyes and despite his pain and withdrawals, making olly feel confortable, you can see the love these 2 guys share. what ever happens, weather they make it true or not, i'm in it for the long hall. keep tugguing at them hearstrings, hope there many more chapters

thankyou. I was waiting for this, I know its not going to be easy, lots of bumps I know but i'm still rooting for the guys. keep them comming

great end to the chapter. love ryder's realisation to a point about mike. a whole lot needs to happen before ryder forgives himself and can live with his actions. maybe ted too needs to get help to deal with the hurt and anger issues or it could resurface. as always, you never disappoint, you're an ace at tugging at my heart strings

I don't blame teddy either. there's a whole lot of pain he's going through. anger and hurt is simmering beneath and yet there's still love. teddy's parents, like any, aren't perfect. i'm concerned though about the damage ryder has done to himself and monitoring his heart sounds ominous. i'm rooting for them to come through this and yet even if they forgive each other, the years between, ryder's health, addiction, forgivness from both guys, all of this could play a role in them being parted. moving onto to next chapter

as I completed this chapter I tore up. great writing thans

wow, how much have these guyschanged. can the time away from each other bridge what happened to each of them. my heart goes towards teddy, butt I can see how ryder is hurting wants to make up and hidden guilt. what happens, i'm in the story for the long hall, I hope that the bonds they share at the end will be stronger because all that they've been through. you are my alltime emo mystro, thankyou, onto next chappy

I'm gona take some of your suggestions, since I'm a movie peasant. I'm more accustomed to radio dramatizations of movies. so, for what it's worth, madam x, only yesterday, broken arrow, the champ, the elephant man, love story, terms of indeerment, randem harvest. these are anxient movies but Ive discovered it a year ago. Maybe I had my head under a stone all these years but the are the movies for what it's worth. some interesting suggestions comming from you though

i'm totally blind and what matters for me is their sweetness, kindness, how they treat others, thoughtfullness. there's also the physical aspect like how they smell, being clean, the voice as well is something that i'm atracted to along with the way they touch me. sometimes the immediate atraction is the voice or smell though

I love cuddling, haven't done it in ages all i do is cuddle my pillow, hope I get a cuddle some time though

I'm glad noone said Brad, from, Mark's, Melenium and the other preditor stories, he's the coolest, then there's, Luke, desert droppings, Tylor peel as well. But I'll stick to brad, he's never borring and I'm sure I'll enjoy the ride.

never got any ever, horny most of the time so i'm afraid when it really happens, i'll stuff up because of over eagerness

I'm a newby to face book and the novelty hasn't worn off. I too managed to link up with some people I know, but I know what you mean about people talking about banalaties, like, what they had for breakfast, where they are, and whether they should shower or not. But what about some advise for a newby on Fb, I'm tempted to just add strangers as friends and chatting, is this wise?

like most of you my first was, Working it out, and I was hooked, then I read the, Long way and went on a Dom binge, but I enjoyed, desert dropings and hello stupid

hey there cresta, I feel your pain but what about people clipping their nails inside your home, dishes, I can identify with, my friend would hint, the sink is looking a bit full there. I don't live with them any more but it wasn't him who was responsibble, it was our house guests. I forgot, talking to people who smell of food they've just eaten, bad breath, the smell of fish.

About eating foods I've never eaten before, its a definately a no no. I think I'm adventurous accept when it comes to my pallet. I've eg, never tasted fruit and wild horses wouldn't get me to try it.

ye, I can identify with most of these especially leaving discs out of the casing, and discs are one of my prized possesions. What about people using the bath and when you go in, they didn't mop up after them, bodily hair in the bath,using almost the entire role of toilet paper but leaving a tiny bit in the role, not enough to serve its function, you spoke about the kitchen, ye, petpeev, rotting food with smells getting into every room, trying to get me to eat meat when people know I'm a vejetarian. I feel your pain!

There are timess i forget about inserting capital letters since when I was at school we used braille and didn't bother about caps. When starting to type, it's sometimes an effort to remmember to use it. I know when and where to use caps, its just remmembering, but some interesting responses, if the message goes through, thats communication isn't it?

life shouldn't be measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away. sometimes the one you love is the one who hurts you most and the friend who takes you into his arms and cries when you cry is the one you never knew you really needed.

eating greecy and messy food while infront the computer and not wiping ones hands after that so that the keybord is stained food substances and oil, throwing your half eaten food into a pot of fresh food, filling shampoo bottle with water to make shampoo look more