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congrats loved both your stories, more please?

colderado game was just awsome, it makes for compulsive reading and tension is throughout the story, I'm really hoping for a sequel as there's scope for lots more. Your writing is awsome, thanks

edge of your seat stuff. wow Adam, this is gutwrenching. I read cc once again and it never fails to provide new perspectives. I love the bittersweet interchanges between Andie and Mat. Each time they speak, one is almost driven to tears because there's a world of difference between what the both say and really want to say. You capture their conversations brilliantly. you're a master at your craft. I too, hope that Andie and Mat end up together, but I don't think that's gona happen unless you continue the story from after the prologue. the other alternative is that you have them spending atleast 6 month together working through their issues. Sad, exciting, gutwrenching, bittersweet, compelling, annoying, at times when both the guys don't realise that they need to talk, it's irresistable. Write on mate, I need my fix. Stay strong. sanjay

I'm glad noone said Brad, from, Mark's, Melenium and the other preditor stories, he's the coolest, then there's, Luke, desert droppings, Tylor peel as well. But I'll stick to brad, he's never borring and I'm sure I'll enjoy the ride.

never got any ever, horny most of the time so i'm afraid when it really happens, i'll stuff up because of over eagerness

I'm a newby to face book and the novelty hasn't worn off. I too managed to link up with some people I know, but I know what you mean about people talking about banalaties, like, what they had for breakfast, where they are, and whether they should shower or not. But what about some advise for a newby on Fb, I'm tempted to just add strangers as friends and chatting, is this wise?

like most of you my first was, Working it out, and I was hooked, then I read the, Long way and went on a Dom binge, but I enjoyed, desert dropings and hello stupid

hey there cresta, I feel your pain but what about people clipping their nails inside your home, dishes, I can identify with, my friend would hint, the sink is looking a bit full there. I don't live with them any more but it wasn't him who was responsibble, it was our house guests. I forgot, talking to people who smell of food they've just eaten, bad breath, the smell of fish.

About eating foods I've never eaten before, its a definately a no no. I think I'm adventurous accept when it comes to my pallet. I've eg, never tasted fruit and wild horses wouldn't get me to try it.

ye, I can identify with most of these especially leaving discs out of the casing, and discs are one of my prized possesions. What about people using the bath and when you go in, they didn't mop up after them, bodily hair in the bath,using almost the entire role of toilet paper but leaving a tiny bit in the role, not enough to serve its function, you spoke about the kitchen, ye, petpeev, rotting food with smells getting into every room, trying to get me to eat meat when people know I'm a vejetarian. I feel your pain!

There are timess i forget about inserting capital letters since when I was at school we used braille and didn't bother about caps. When starting to type, it's sometimes an effort to remmember to use it. I know when and where to use caps, its just remmembering, but some interesting responses, if the message goes through, thats communication isn't it?

life shouldn't be measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away. sometimes the one you love is the one who hurts you most and the friend who takes you into his arms and cries when you cry is the one you never knew you really needed.

eating greecy and messy food while infront the computer and not wiping ones hands after that so that the keybord is stained food substances and oil, throwing your half eaten food into a pot of fresh food, filling shampoo bottle with water to make shampoo look more

I said you Neph, cause I know that they'd never be a doul moment. tiger's naughtiness and his quirkiness, your bags of tricks and surprises, and Mark Arbur's conversations, both about history, music, along with his nonconventional side, with all of you in the mix, they'll never be a doul moment. I'd feel like a kid in a candy store and dodge work just to see what you guys are up to. Ah, to dream the impossible dream. Time for me to wake up

taming, mmm, that would be a challenge, but me thinks you just too nice to wana do that, unless you get

on the male side, tiger because of his quirkyness and although I don't know him all that well, he's interesting, Mark, I suspect we'll have some interesting times, on the female side, Neph, you just awsome, but tiger, definately

dirty dishes lying there for a week and aquiring a distinctive stink, grinding teeth when i'm trying to sleep, taking up most of the bed and blankets, leaving a door half open, either leave it closed or open it, saying I'm on my way, be there in ten minutes, and getting back in five hours

I work at a radio station and had to do a midnight shift, when I got home, I came into my room and saw a whole lot of people, wired, but that might have been okay, except for the fact that my sheets were drenched in pee and no one would clean it out.

you love them, you really do, you'd do anything for them, but oh, doesn't it make you grind your teeth or count to ten when they...simple thing they do that pee you off like, leaving the cap off toothpaste, leaving half eaten stuff lying around, using dirty hands to use stuff in the kitchen, after sex, turning over and falling off to sleep, michrowave sex, eating in bed and leaving crumbs in the sheets, smelly toes, get the drift. What are those little things that people who live with you do that makes your brain dial 911. Any takers?

Rivitting beginning interms of story, tension through chapters, subtle build up, eg, touching hands, etc, and yes, depending on the story, sex but not for sex's sake. It should be used to devellop the plot and charectors, giving us a better understanding of them. Describing sex scenes could be a craft, however, if it's written with crass language, that would be cool as well cause depends on the kind of story and setting.

I think I've read most of Ken follett's books, Lie down with lions, Eye of the needle, that was rivitting, and ofcourse, pillars of the earth, looking forward to reading the sequel.

How about, Jeff Chandler, Jamie glover and Charlston heston, oh, Richard chamberlyn. Don't know if you heard of some of them. I am more for deep, sometimes husky, voices, people that are articulate, the main guy in Avetaar, Sam, not sure of his second name.

hey there, wellcome to ga, people are interesting and many very friendly. this site can become addictive, you'll have an awsome time.

the smell of someone just come out of a shower, Panteen shampoo, some lotion, clean smelling makes me wana move closer

some people are turned on by smells of deoderant, others by natural sweat, that's me, yet others by the smells of new clothes. so what turns you on, me, ye, after sex