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  1. ricky

    PROLOGUE

    SWEEEEEET! Book 2! It's like a second Christmas!
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    Ch 40: Survivors

    Oh, and I would have been happy to see Brian and Adam get together in the absence of Jacob. But who knows, maybe in the sequel. eh?
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    EPILOGUE

    You know, I forgot just how great of an author you are. And you can always tell the truly great authors because they have no reviews until the very last chapter. ONLY those with incredible restraint can stop long enough to comment. The rest of us HAVE to go on and read the next. Reviewing would burst the bubble of disbelief. I marathoned it. Just couldn't stop. I MAY be suffering from sleep deprivation shortly. That was a most incredible story. The only part I had an issue with was the bickering in the hall about who would go in to retrieve the weapon. My family thought I was nuts as I was screaming at my computer to just get your asses IN there, we were losing the city! Ya, I was hopelessly involved in the story. What I HONESTLY don't understand is why you're profile says only that you're a "promising" author. Is that like a practicing physician? We're supposed to wait until they get it right? Well you already have so . . . WTF? Thanks for a wonderfully great adventure. I'm gonna have to go now and see if the sequel is up yet.
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    Chapter 11

    Excellence in stenography! You are obviously a master wordsmythe. Well done!
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    Chapter 10

    LOL, this chapter was a gas!
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    Chapter 9

    Out of the mouths of babes come words of great wisdom.
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    Chapter 8

    Perhaps the greatest courage was in deciding to make the decision.
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    Chapter 7

    He's gonna need some help when he melts down and it all comes out. The Problem is really how do you explain it to a 13 year old.
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    Chapter 6

    The beginning. But if I have to venture a guess, it's the former wife getting in the way and not wanting him to see Alex as long as he was living a life of sin. *sigh*
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    Chapter 5

    So much going on. So much to sort through for both of them. But! Easily built, easily torn down. So perhaps they will see the challenges as creating a solid foundation.
  11. Damn! That just means more questions! And he still needs to go see his new home. I can't wait. Perhaps he'll run into Mr. Llewellyn while there. (Gotta love the Welsh language.)
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    Chapter 4

    Amazing how true to life this is. Fate often deals us cards and then we screw up on the draw. Will he? I think not since we've already read the ending first. Well done.
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    Chapter 3

    The writing of pain is so difficult. For a good writer to do it he must write through the blur of tears.
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    Chapter 2

    Finding the greatness in the story I SO expected. Awesome!
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    Chapter 1

    An awesome start to what I know will be a fantastic story. Loving it.
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    Chapter 75

    An Excellent Chapter. Of course aren't they all? And the formation of a new story arc is slowly appearing. And with it new intrigue. Now off to the forum to weave new questions and discuss the subtle nudges noted. And I read through it 3 times because there was so much meat to be tasted.
  17. A delicious chapter! A full meal to digest. Much was said and much was suggested. So let me get started. First, I'm most anxious to find out what Spencer has to say. What new situation is he about to unleash? We know he is involved in the guild because of his treatment of Dr Jackson's situation. But who is the power behind it all? Why do I suspect a Mann, Wilcox or Fox involvement? These issues are usually resolved by following the money. Now, Cavendish mentioned the smuggling but did not mention if they indeed caught them on this end. When he goes to his tailor he'll need to get a lobster outfit as well won't he? Being a Col of the Marines, won't he? I'm sure there will be moments he will need it. It should really trip Arthur's trigger as he loves a man in uniform and this would be the material that fantasies were created from. His greatest love in a new uniform. And speaking of Arthur, why would having Arthur's support mean anything to the Duke of Clarence? Does that mean he was instrumental in Jardine's banishment? And no appearance by Mr Fox at the hazard table tonight. So it WAS an exceptional evening. I'm sure that Fitzwilliam can not be happy in the channel fleet. But it's a good place to wait until George has a new ship. Eastwyck, Llewellyn, Fitzwilliam. He's already piecing together his new team. Something Cavendish mentioned. That the Earle had been favored by the King but little recompense for his service. This statement causes some questions. First, why has he not been honored? Is it because it is well known that Freddie would squander anything bestowed upon the Earle? Did he request any further benefit due to him be directed toward George instead? Basically throwing the Marguesad to happen to the deserving son of honor? Such an act of Nobility would be in line with his father. And such a discussion would be something that the Duke could have with the King. I still think that Freddie and Davina should have a carriage accident. Bertie is now respectable enough to assume the heir position. And that would put the Earle back in the running as the estate would not be in danger of being squandered. Or now that Freddie has a son, would He be in line instead of Bertie? I suspect so. Of course after the carriage accident George would probably have to raise the child that is most likely his anyways. Finding out who on the privy council sent the package to Captain Sommers should provide some useful information. And there still needs to be a discussion regarding Gatling and Calvert. One can only hope that the exchange happens quickly. Perhaps he can be exchanged and be promised a ship that will not be ready for a few months. That would allow him to be more involved in it's creation, put his crew to work on it and yet leave him time on shore to piss everyone off. We know he does not do well on land for long. That may change as he ages but he is not anywhere near there now. So did I miss anything?
  18. Gotta be getting close, right?
  19. A whole new meaning of morning wood! A whole new meaning to "The Two Handed Switch" too!
  20. 0.o Welsh and sheep? Interesting correlation. Does that mean that the men are men and the sheep are nervous? No WONDER the Welsh always have a song in their heart, a spring in their step and a bulge in their pants. Welcome Wizzkid. Can we call you "wiz" for short? Of course not meaning that you wiz with anything short. ok, ok, so I'd pick a pocket. I still love puns.
  21. Welcome Lach, Check out the FAQ's for the rules regarding age and such. This is the first place I've ever found where the FAQ's actually ARE! And if you have any questions that aren't answered there you will find a host of people willing to give you the answers you seek. Be welcome!
  22. SOUNDS Tasty! Can't wait. Thanks and be welcome!
  23. Welcome! So what is the storyline for your novel? What type or tags will it show? Give us a little idea of your chosen subject. Pleeeeeeease?
  24. Delightfully sprite. It gives a whole new meaning to morning wood!
  25. No, Lady Gaga ROTFLMAO
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