Rebelghost85

Great ending. I'm really happy that there will be a Riding Lessons III. I bet we'll see some conflict between Devon and everyone's favorite (least favorite) heel and bully what's his face.

I agree with Brice's last thoughts. Sparks are going to fly. I hope it doesn't happen at the football game.

I wonder what the heck is going through Sarah's mind? I'm worried about her. I hope they can work whatever issues she has out of her system. The upcoming chapters are going to be critical for everyone's future. I hope for all three of the guys' sake that things turn out well.

I really admire your ability to stop a story at a good ending point, leaving room for a sequel or for the reader's imagination to finish the storyline. It allows you to cut your stories into manageable chunks and we get to clamor for sequels. I'm very happy that Micah is in the past permanently and that he was able to change his relationship with Corey. His humanity- the fact that he always cries and vomits after killing, no matter how many times he's forced to do it and his own form of intelligence made him extremely compelling. Thank you for sharing this with us all.

And the plot thickens! Shadowy moves are being made throughout the nation. Hopefully Micah and the Howards can stop them.

Whoa, and here I thought that we were past the worst of it. They need to find out what nefarious scheme was going on. Hopefully Senator Howard believes Micah when he says Trasker needs to be taken off of the team.

First off, I love that you're starting a new story and that it's about dogs! And pit bulls! And how stupid breed discrimination is! All but one of Micheal Vick's fighting dogs were rehabilitated. If the "worst" of the pit bulls could be trained and the majority of them adopted by families then breed discrimination makes no sense. I'm looking forward to this take on a love story. It seems that you're setting it up for an eventual three way relationship. I'm interested in seeing if you can make it work and make it seem realistic.

So freaking excited. Micah did it! I'm really glad his mom turned around but I'm also worried that something is going to mess it up. The storm has me worried and retribution from the town is a real threat.

I agree with Daithi. Something is going to tip the scales out of balance. It might be the car, it might be something else. Its fascinating that the school is as inclusive as it is. There has to be something there. A homophobic teacher, some trouble makers... something. As for the home front John needs to insist that the family go through counseling or it's doomed to fall apart. Sixteen years of hostility is a lot of baggage. I'm surprised that Micah is even half accepting of John's attempts to make peace. A final note on the school front: At least everyone knows he's gay so there won't be any pressure for Micah to date. I believe him when he says that he'll fuck a woman to obey his mother but if she does force him to do it there won't be any reconciliation between them ever. I don't have much hope for a better relationship as it is. I can't wait until the next chapter. I imagine that there will be tons of sparks flying and we might just see the inferno of war erupt around Micah (sorry for the cheesy sentence but I couldn't help myself).

So close but no cigar. I wonder what's gotten into John recently. Does he hope to work both Micah and his mother over the two years to save his family? I really don't see it happening. Micah's mother will lose her first born son, Johnny will lose his older brother and Micah will be out of their lives forever. Micah is still fighting his war and I don't see the rules of engagement changing any time soon unless his mother leaves that stupid church and changes her mind. I'm curious about what Corey's mom gave Micah before he left though. It must have been big if there was an emphasis on her faith in the boys' relationship.

My position on Micah's mother is softening a bit. It would be nice if she were to turn around. I doubt it but things can change. I see that Micah also realized that he'll be walking out of John Jr.'s life as well in two years. I'm looking forward to how the next battles in this war go.

Wow. What a different direction. I'm betting that he gets his football career on the path to college and can then join Corey at Stanford. I also wonder what he's going to do with his new relationship with John Jr. and Sr. What does John Sr. think of these developments? It seems like he's becoming an ally of Micah.

I really hope Zach had enough love from his dad to avoid attachment disorder. It's a lifelong struggle to overcome and very hard on families. I wonder if we're going to find out what Zach's issue is? I hope he's not screwed up about his Dads' intimacy and if he is that they can fix his misconceptions.

Are Micah's actions changing the future? Is he really there? I hope so. Both he and Corey deserve happiness.

I was right! Time travel. Hopefully things work out better or Micah this time around.

Time travel? I love the beginning of your stories. They give us just enough to become interested but leave so many questions.

Beautiful and tragic, yet there is hope. Perhaps they really will meet their lost loved ones in the next life. Thank you for posting this.

Oh god. Poor K'mer I wish he could have survived. It's so sad that he died, but I have faith that J'shon will be able to get over the death with the help of B'rrel.

J'shon's father's dislike of the gay relationships greens engage in makes sense, and I'm glad he has accepted J'shon. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, which is awesome because I can read it right now.

Get your head right J'shon. B'rrel is perfect for you! I'm also worried about the changing thread patterns and the reminder of the rider mortality rates is scary.

You have no idea how happy I am that the experience wasn't traumatic for J'shon. This was a great chapter, and I'm looking forward to the future.

Now I'm nervous, even through I was waiting for the action to pick up. I hope no one gets seriously injured.

J'shon and B'rell forever!

Waiting for the shoe to drop. I'm sure it will be a doozy. I'm hoping for a B'rel and J'shon pairing at the moment.

I really want Jashon to impress on a bronze, but I have a feeling he's going to impress a green. Things will be interesting.